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Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2011.01.10 - 06:19PM
Title: Chapter 1
I was ever so slightly worried (just a tiny bit) that Ginny might be upset about being pregnant and not be as excited as Harry, so I was delighted she was happy too.
However, once the dust settles, I think one healer might get a bit of a rolicking for sending the results to the wrong person!
Author's Response: Ha, yes I think the Healer would be very lucky to get away with that. I think there might have been the possibility of a Bat-Bogey Hex. :)
Reviewer: pippan121 Signed
Date: 2010.03.13 - 08:56PM
Title: Chapter 1
Very Sweet
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: babewithbrains Signed
Date: 2010.02.27 - 05:21PM
Title: Chapter 1
Hi Hannah. Your story was way better than my attempt at the challenge. Nice one.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, although I think we probably have different opinions on it. :)
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2010.02.22 - 09:30PM
Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh. This is just so sweet.
However, it is my humble opinion that the song which you included right in the middle of the story is completely unnecessary and does not contribute to the storyline. In fact, it breaks the otherwise smooth flow of the plot.
Other than that, I think this is a very good one shot.
Author's Response: Thanks for readign and reviewing. I'm glad you like it. I wasn;t sure whether to put those lines in or not, obviously not, and thanks for pointing it out. ~ Hannah
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2010.02.22 - 07:16PM
Title: Chapter 1
the couple has the right at this point and genong needs to get a life....kutgw
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with you totally.
Reviewer: drummersgirl Signed
Date: 2010.02.22 - 06:49PM
Title: Chapter 1
No Review
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed
Date: 2010.02.22 - 06:16PM
Title: Chapter 1
Nice!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: GoDons Signed
Date: 2010.02.22 - 04:22PM
Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it, particularly since it's my first attempt at a challenge story.
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