Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2014.02.21 - 08:37AM
Title: Chapter 2 – Looking for ‘The One'
Very intriguing. I love the fact that Snape is both curious and a bit wary of 'the girl' in Ginny's dream. Obviously, he knows it is Lily; but the knowledge of this, must be 'killing' him.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Marinka Signed
Date: 2014.02.16 - 05:55PM
Title: Chapter 2 – Looking for ‘The One'
did he Obliviated her? She came out of that discussion with vague feeling that the questions was asked but not ideas why she thought that way..
Author's Response: I did have the following note at the start of the first scene where Ginny was talking to Professor Snape about "the girl" in question, ie. Ginny's 'version' of the memory - "Authors note: The following scene is taken word for word from Ginny’s memory, and is a true and accurate representation of what she herself remembers. It is also a lie! Unlike Horace Slughorn’s memory, which he himself modified, there will be no telltale signs that this memory has even been tampered with, or that, out of the entire scene, only two of the sentences spoken between them actually took place. But there may be subtle signs. For example: the loss of a large portion of time, or, knowledge she has no recollection of acquiring, or, subtle suggestions in the back of her mind that are not of her own volition. Readers, though these may be explained away in this chapter, make no mistake, these signs are there, and all is not as it seems." ... However my Beta advised to leave it out of the story, and let the reader guess what was really going on in that scene, and what Snape had really done to her. Thanks for the review. :)