I decided not to review this chapter until I'd read it 3 times. It's time.

I love that I have the knowledge to explain all the little discrepancies that Jacqui sees at the party, and I love how observant Jacqui is at catching all these things. She's my favorite non-canon character.

So, will Jaqcqui be online later looking for a hospital named "St. Mungo's"? If so, she'll probably assume that it's short for something else, and not the homeless shelter in London.

I noted that Phoebe was included in serving the drinks for the toast. I assumed that was to make her feel better after the name calling and trifle incident. BTW - I initially thought that obliviations were occurring when Harry and Ginny lead the Berrys and Savilles out of the room, but on further readings, I don't think that happened. Were they preparing to do that spell if needed?

Now that the party's done, what's next? It feels like this is wrapping up. I'd love for it to continue, but my wife wants me to tell her when it's done - 'cause she doesn't like to read incomplete stories. regardless, I want more stories with Jacqui. Once I get caught up on my reviews I'll reward myself with (finally) reading "Xmas Daze".

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

As I’ve said before, I’m sure that this story is so popular because you, the reader, know so much more than Jacqui. I’m really rather pleased at how she’s turned out.

You will find out what (if anything) Jacqui does with her knowledge in future chapters.

You’re really good at noticing (and correctly guessing) the background action. Phoebe needed to be comforted, and Harry and Ginny were assessing whether memories needed to be altered. Did they? Wait and see.

Next? This is where things get really complicated for me. My original plan (when I was expecting most of the chapters to be third person Auror action) was abandoned long ago (after chapter 2 – I think). I reckon that I’m now approaching the halfway stage of this story, and yet all I’ve done is establish the characters and plot. I don’t want to give too much away. All I’ll say is that I have a timeline: 4 September – full moon; 7 September – James first day at school; 26 September – housewarming party (and the invite says October! How did that happen? No, I was wrong, it says September (whistles innocently)); 4 October – full moon; 7 October – James’s birthday; 30 October – Halloween; 2 November – full moon; 5 November – Bonfire Night; the end.

-N-

So good I totally understand why you spent so long on it! It was really well written! I am pleased that the party went so smoothly and that you've shown how Fred is still a tender subject with the family ! An excelent chapter and I can't wait for the next one :D x !!!

Author's Response: thank you. Next from me will (i hope) be a chapter of Hunters and Prey. -N-

Wonderful! So pleased to see an update, and reading that chapter (and the one before again, to catch up ;-)) was the perfect way to spend Sunday morning. Love the descriptions of the social interactions at the party, and Jacqui's observations. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, the party is now over (thank goodness) although there's another one coming up soon. The next update won't take so long. -N-

Great, I always look forward to reading a new chapter of this story :D This one was excellent, as usual.

Author's Response: Thank you, i'g glad you liked it. -N-

The Statute of Secrecy is about to suffer a serious breach!

Author's Response: Really? I'm not so certain. -N-

Great to see an update.
Well written and entertaining as always.
Loved your use of Luna to explain away the accidental magic in a way that would have the guests remembering that rather than the incident itself. There had to be some magic - love your placement.
Victorie seems like such a miniature Fleur, "No, I'm staying inside and pretending to be a grown-up at the party, not playing with the little ones." Only to show how much of a child she still is. We do tend to realize much too late that the kids table is where the fun is. Hmmm...Thanksgiving is next week, maybe I can reserve a seat.
I've read "James Sirius and Me" on ff.net (and "Centuries" here) and am dying to know:
1. Is this is "Annie" that James marries?
2. Is she magical or muggle? I know how "J.S. and Me" goes, but I have my suspicions.
3. When did the Charltons actually find out about the magic?



Author's Response: Thanks.
It's a relief to me that I've finally managed to get this chapter completed.
I've probably said this before, but Luna doesn't need to fit in with Muggles, after all she doesn't bother to fit in with the magical world, and people simple regard her as strange. I was basing Victoire on Fleur's baby sister, Gabrielle, who was about Victoire's age when Harry first met her.
As for my next-gen stories (James Sirius and Me, and Zygosis):
1. James marries someone called Annie, and JS&Me he rediscovers someone called Annie.
2. Making Annie magical would make life very easy for me.
3. For the first time, or for the final time?
:-D
-N-

It's like walking into a room full of old friends. Wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks, it will be a while before I write another chapter with a cast this big. -N-

An update!!!!! Yay! i am very ill so thank you for cheering me up with this update.

Author's Response: Hi. I'm sorry to hear that you're unwell. More soon, I hope. -N-

Excellent chapter! I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks I'll try to ensure that the wait is not so long. -N-

well long time no see....glad to see that the party went off with out a hitch but then again they did have a few little bumps but they always happen.....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks, hopefully it won't be so long the next time. Without a major hitch, anyway. -N-