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Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2011.01.02 - 10:32AM Title: Chapter 2 - Ginny Weasley and her Magically Magical Magic Dancing Eyes!

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This chapter was so far out into right field as to be in another state. Hermione and the Weasley brothers were encouraging Harry to do what?! At least somone stopped evil Neville before he could lure poor Luna off somewhere with the Imperius Curse (Spenser had better return my chainsaw soon). As for your ending--no one should have three of those in their yard until everyone has two! Yours is a wacky, wacky mind, but the story was certainly fun. It left me thinking, and that's the thing for which I especially look in a story. I very rarely read R-rated work, and almost never beta them, but let it be said--you never crossed the line. I'm also glad that you kept the bunny slippers suggestion--Ralph Fiennes wears a pair for each of his roles (it's why the camera never takes in his feet). Thanks for a really, really, really mischievous story--Eric B.

Author's Response: Thanks again, Spencer! I DID think of finishing it with a ScoobyDoo-style ending, with Voldemort saying \"... and I\'d have gotten away with it, if it wasn\'t for you meddling kids, and that darn dog!\" And I had a scene in my head, where ripper the bulldog is barking out in the front garden, and Aunt Marge opens her front door to see what\'s going on, only to be confronted by the Killer Nazi Vampire Robots from Outer Space, who take control of her via a muddy old boot that gets tied to her head. But hey! Maybe that\'ll be in the Sequel !!?? Mmmwwaahhahhhahhhahhhaaa!!! *evil laugh*



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2011.01.02 - 10:16AM Title: Chapter 1 - “My Godfather went to Azkaban, and all I got was this lousy t-shirt!”

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The fun thing about reading this story is how you set us up, and then you make a hard left turn without applying the brakes or utilizing you signal. The reader is on the edge of their seat waiting for something that you never have happen, but instead gets to experience the unexpected. That makes it all the more interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks Spencer! It was a weird one for me, as I wrote the whole thing pretty much over 2 nights, and just wrote whatever came into my head, as apposed to planning the structure of my story, which I do for most of my fics. I had a load of different ideas I just threw together in a huge pot, and threw it together. I\'m pretty sure if I spend a few weeks working on it, it would have been a very different story. But that was part of the fun of it, keeping it fresh and raw and insane. Even I didn\'t know where I was heading when I started it. I did tweak the end of it though, and add some dry roasted peanuts. My original plan was to have it finish with Harry flying out the roof of Hogwarts in a huge glass elevator full of candy, but I liked bringing Voldemort back for one last time instead. :)



Reviewer: babewithbrains Signed Date: 2010.12.31 - 08:28PM Title: Chapter 2 - Ginny Weasley and her Magically Magical Magic Dancing Eyes!

Hahahahaa!!!!! That was one of the funniest stories I've ever read!!! It put down every single one of the cliches that I hate so much. Well done. This one's a definite contender for Best Comedy.

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! I\'m glad you enjoyed. I was a tad worried before posting it, as it\'s completely different from everything else I\'ve ever done, and I was worried that people would hate it. But I\'ve been reading a lot of fanfic on other sites, and getting really annoyed with a lot of the cliches. I mean, why would everyone be celebrating after the Battle when so many people have died? Yet I\'ve read a ton of fics where they\'re acting like they\'re all on happy pills. Weeee! It\'s one big party! Let\'s all shag! I mean, what the Hell?? Or ones where Harry calls Ginny \"Baby\" and loads of other dumb names. Or Draco STILL being evil, dispite all he\'s been through. I think I managed to get most of my pet hates in there. *evil grin* Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: st122 Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 03:10PM Title: Chapter 2 - Ginny Weasley and her Magically Magical Magic Dancing Eyes!

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:) My crazy entry for this challenge was also written to break myself away from my much heavier fic. Every now and then you need to lighten yourself up a bit. :) Good luck.

Author's Response: Thanks! Most of the fics I\'m currently writing are my way of gearing up to writing my main epic action/adventure HP fanfic story \'The Battle on LittleHampton, which I plan on starting later this year. I planned to write around 4 or 5 different styles and types of H/G fanfic before beginning my epic one, as I know I\'ll be writing that for a very long time with no breaks. So thought i\'d get my shorter fic ideas out the way first, and also help me iron out a lot of my grammar issues, which using really great Beta readers has really helped with. Good luck to you too. :)



Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.12.26 - 10:36PM Title: Chapter 2 - Ginny Weasley and her Magically Magical Magic Dancing Eyes!

Uh...well skip it.

Author's Response: lol. I loved writing the end of this fic, as it\'s sheer lunacy. I kind of wanted it to go off the rails at the end, and I think I achieved that. A shoe being used as a wand, Voldemort\'s peanut allergy, Malfoy being a robot, and Harry wearing a bra. I was actually tempted to publish this with all my Beta\'s comments on it, as they were sheer hilarity. If you\'re ever writing comedy fanfic, I can\'t recommend using Spenser Hemmingway as your Beta checker enough. His comments, in which evil Neville was running around with a chainsaw, had me in tears. Thanks! ;)



Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.12.26 - 10:24PM Title: Chapter 1 - “My Godfather went to Azkaban, and all I got was this lousy t-shirt!”

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Well, I WAS going to say that aside from this being hysterical, all that was lacking was throwing in the word anyways...but you did that!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it was as much fun reading as it was writing this lunacy. I really needed a break from writing my angsty fics, so I had much fun with this! My next fic, which is with the Betas, is another departure for me. It\'s a fluffy romance H/G alt universe fic, which I hope you\'ll all enjoy. Then it\'ll be back to Chapter 3 of my Harry Potter Season 8 fic, which is probably longer than Chapters 1 and 2 put together, and has been really long in the writing. I was actually busy re-writing part of it today, so hopefully it\'ll see the light of day soon. Thanks again! ;)




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