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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.29 - 06:26AM Title: 30: Surveillance

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This plan seems rather dangerous for Scorpius. Hope it works out.

Author's Response: It's dangerous for everyone, but if they want to catch the Matron and her toadies, they're going to have to take some risks. Keep reading. You'll find out what's coming when you get there.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.05.11 - 05:38PM Title: 30: Surveillance

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Harry sure left everyone in a panic...lol! The sort of thing he would do at school as well...made me smile:)

It certainly sounds risky leving Scorpious...and I think their main priority should be Scorpius...the capture of the Matron is secondary, in my opinion, to the rescue of a minor. Now, I am in a different position from a lot of your reviewers...I am reading what I know is a completed fiction. So I know how many chapters are left to go and there is a LOT....so I am going to guess that Matron is NOT caught, so I only hope that Scorpius is safely returned home...?

Author's Response: The decision to leave Scorpius to the Matron's whims was very hard for the Aurors in the cave. However, because Scorpius wants her in custody as much as they do, he was willing to act as bait because he knows that if things get too awfully bad, the Auror in his cell will come to his rescue and take him home. He has to have that sort of faith. Also, Harry did what he does best; care for people and hang the consequences. Draco and Asteria needed "saving" and Harry felt he was the best on e for that job... just like he did at fifteen.



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2011.12.03 - 09:32AM Title: 30: Surveillance

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Author's Response: Thanks for giving this chapter so many stars.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.10.29 - 09:11PM Title: 30: Surveillance

Scorpius is awesome! Draco and Astoria have done a great job. So glad Harry is with them. Too funny about the panic he started by disappearing. I'm a little leery about how many people know what's going down, especially at St. Mungo's. Sounds like a recipe for disaster.

Author's Response: I think he's an awesome young wizard, too. And you're right about it being the parents' job to help their children have the confidence and courage to get through the trying moments. I'm glad you think they're good parents. As for Harry, his "saving people thing" naturally kicks in when it's apparent he's needed somewhere and when he received Ron's note, away he went to try to save the day again! As Molly Weasley said in CoS, and I misquote, "No note, wheelchair gone..." I'm not sure you have much to worry about on the Matron's account. She's a busy woman running the Non-Magical Injuries Ward, plus the hospital is a huge place. You'll just have to see what her day was like in the following chapter. Thanks for writing to me. See you Thursday...



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2011.10.29 - 11:49AM Title: 30: Surveillance

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You need to keep in check how you call your characters. Sometimes you say Ginny and some others it's Mrs Potter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I'll take it under advisement.



Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2011.10.28 - 04:46AM Title: 30: Surveillance

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Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the stars.



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.10.28 - 12:42AM Title: 30: Surveillance

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Author's Response: Thanks for the stars and for reading.



Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2011.10.27 - 10:35PM Title: 30: Surveillance

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Superb. This is one of the best fanfics I think I've ever read. The plot is interesting, the character development logical and original, with just enough tension and suspense to keep the story flowing smoothly.

Author's Response: You're making me blush! I'm really glad you're enjoying my story because I'm enjoying writing it and the challenges the development of a multiple-character fic presents. Thanks for reading. Until next Thursday...



Reviewer: sidnandragin Signed Date: 2011.10.27 - 02:29PM Title: 30: Surveillance

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OMG! You are killing me! Just when I thought you were going to let Scorpius go.... you have them wait there until she checks up on him.. killing me! Okay..
Great chapter, getting excited that soon we will know the identity & capture this vile person and her cronies..
I cannot wait...

Author's Response: I think you'll live even if it takes an entire week to completely rescue Scorpius. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and I'll see you next Thursday...



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.10.27 - 12:04PM Title: 30: Surveillance

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Good chapter with things going in the right direction. I would have thought that dealing with such a slippery and dangerous character as the Matron, Ron would have called for more backup.

Author's Response: I talked with someone knowledgeable about the apprehension of criminals (another adult HP fan) and asked them the same thing. The answer was that as long as there are more Aurors than there are suspects, Ron wouldn't need to call in back up with four or five othe people on his team. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2011.10.27 - 11:16AM Title: 30: Surveillance

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I'm glad Scorpius is found, but I wish he was safer. Another great chapter!

Author's Response: You're right, Scorpius needs to be somewhere other than the cave, but the Aurors are with him now, so he has protection and company, so he's no longer alone... and that's a good thing. More of his rescue coming next week. See you then...



Reviewer: ladyginny89 Signed Date: 2011.10.27 - 08:29AM Title: 30: Surveillance

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WOW! I am so glad they found Scorpius! Now they need to get him out! I can't wait until next week!

Author's Response: I promise they will in the next chapter. He's been hanging around that cave far too long. See you next Thursday! Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: annep Signed Date: 2011.10.27 - 07:46AM Title: 30: Surveillance

Ginny has been an auror's wife for how many years? How could she blab about an ongoing investigation? All she had to say was that Harry must have been called away on official business. She's probably helped the criminal with that blunder. Also I've been wondering how you catch someone who has a time turner -- if he/she is smart enough to keep it at all times, the law will probably never catch up.

Author's Response: If you read the Ginny-in-the-lift section again, you'll notice that she doesn't say anything until she and Healer Stilwell are alone. There aren't any other people with them, so they feel they can talk freely. As for the Matron, yes, she has the Time-Turner, but eventually, she'll make a mistake with it and the Aurors will be there to catch her. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Until next Thursday...




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