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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.30 - 01:26PM Title: 35: Firsts

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It is good to read about them all recovering and moving on. This chapter made me so hungry for fish and chips dripping in malt vinegar.

Author's Response: I made myself hungry for that particular meal while writing the chapter. As Ron puts it, a bit of grease never hurt anyone and it certainly made Harry happy.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.05.12 - 07:19PM Title: 35: Firsts

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Harry was truly happy to be returning to work and I loved the prank they played on him...

On the whole Brian's return to school for the first time went pretty well, but those around him have a lot to learn about how to treat him and he himself will have to face the difficulties one at a time.

Author's Response: You've hit several nails on the head all at once. Teens can be very insensitive in their ignorance, but the stories about how Brian copes once he's back at Hogwarts for good are for another time.



Reviewer: tloulee Signed Date: 2012.01.11 - 09:28AM Title: 35: Firsts

Yay Harry's back at work and able to go home on the weekends. Also, do I see a budding romance between Brian & Lily or just a good friendship =)

Author's Response: This is definitely a happy chapter because of all those happy things happening for Harry. And yes, there is a hint of romance in a very new friendship between Lily and Brian. However, because of the age difference (he's three years older than she), I'm planning on having them be friends for several years until she matures a little more. After he leaves Hogwarts it won't matter quite so much that he's and "older bloke" and it will be fun to write some follow-up one-shots showing Lily's rise in status with her girlfriends because she has an "older" boyfriend. So... for right now, Lily will be the friend Brian needs as he prepares for his re-entrance into Hogwarts. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. There's a new chapter coming out on January 19th!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2011.12.30 - 08:38AM Title: 35: Firsts

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Great chapter, keep on writing

Author's Response: I certainly will and I won't stop even when this particular story is finished. Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: ladyginny89 Signed Date: 2011.12.17 - 11:57PM Title: 35: Firsts

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I love the fluff! I can't believe this story is coming to an end soon! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: The next few chapters will be a mix of fluff and angst as I tie up the loose ends and we find out what's happening with all the characters. Because of the holidays and all that entails, I won't be publishing again until after the new year begins. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.12.17 - 05:08AM Title: 35: Firsts

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Have a big happy smile.

Author's Response: That's precisely what I was hoping for for my readers. Happy Holidays and thanks for reading.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2011.12.17 - 01:32AM Title: 35: Firsts

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I have a lump in my throat too. Excellent.

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.12.17 - 12:28AM Title: 35: Firsts

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I love the way things are starting to wrap up. It was nice to see that Harry and Ginny are finally going to be getting some definitely needed alone time back home. And Harry back at work...I remember a time in this story when I wondered if he'd ever be able to do that. I'm so glad he's getting his life back again. It means so much to him. Susan and Mary Beth cracked me up, by the way.

I think my favorite part is of Lily and Brian. It's evident that they'll just be friends for awhile since she's so young, but there is definite potential for something more there, I believe.

I noticed you responded earlier that you are planning on doing a few one shots in the future with these characters. I look forward to reading those, though I think it would be fun if we somehow had a full fledged story around them at some point. Just saying... :)

Author's Response: Harry is definitely starting to get his life back. From the beginning, this was the day that Healer Stilwell and Silvia have been preparing him for. He may not be back full time, but it's a start that allows him to continue to train in the mornings. I'm glad you enjoyed the prank. It was fun to write. He's also more relaxed now that he and Ginny have their weekends together. You're right about Lily and Brian being friends for a while. There's plenty of romance that could happen, but Brian needs a friend who understands and accepts him more right now than he does a romantic liason, so friends they'll stay. I really don't know what sorts of stories will come out of the last few chapters of this story, but the potential is there and I already have the plot bunnies beginning to gather... So glad you're anticipating the new stories. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.12.16 - 07:50PM Title: 35: Firsts

Great chapter. Loved the file prank. Too funny. Nice to see Harry being able to move on with his life and start living. Brian too. Cute with Lily.

Author's Response: From the beginning, Healer Stilwell and Silvia have been preparing Harry for the day he goes back to work. He may be easing himself back into his former life while continuing his therapy in the mornings, but he's definitely taken the step back into normal life as has Brian. At this point in time, he needs an understanding friend and if she happens to be an unattached secong year, so what... he trusts her more than he does the girls in his own year (except for Kendra) and that's a good basis for a lasting friendship. Thanks for writing to me.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2011.12.16 - 02:20PM Title: 35: Firsts

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Yeah!! Great chapter, full of lots of good things. It seems like Harry is progressing well and I am so impressed with Ron's handling of everything. It's got to be hard seeing your best friend like that. I loved the kids, it was really great. Lily is so cute.

Author's Response: You're right about Harry's plight being hard on Ron. However, Ron has taken on the responsibility of the investigation and has grown with the position because he feels he needs to be as good as Harry is in his own way. I'm glad you liked the Lily and Brian scene. I had fun writing it. Thanks for writing to me.



Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 03:59PM Title: 35: Firsts

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Lily and Brian! :)

Author's Response: I'm planning to have them just be friends for a while until Lily is a little older, but it's still nice to pair them up and I'm glad you approve. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: decdraft Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 01:38PM Title: 35: Firsts

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Loved it! Was exactly the scenes I have been waiting to see - especially Harry and Ginny. Looks like Brian is getting used to his new normal too - and with Lily as a part of it! Loved the last chapter, was very realistic to see Scorpius still dealing with his captivity - and especially that Ron was helping him. All of the characters have grown so much in this story. I may not get out here to review as often as I would like, but the first thing I do on Thursday mornings is look for an update. I will be so lost when this story is done! Hope you have some plot bunnies dancing in your head for a new story!

Author's Response: It tickles me pink to know you always look for an update on Thursday mornings! Unfortunately, due to the holidays coming up, I won't be posting again until January. However, I'm writing steadily on up-coming chapters, so I'll be ready to post again soon with more of the scenes you and my other readers all want to see. The Brian/Lily pairing seemed to come naturally because of how he reacted to her at the Quidditch match; she understands what he's going through and can see the real Brian as oppose to the one people are feeling sorry for. Plot bunnies... yes, lots of them because of how I'm leaving Brian and Lily, James and Kendra, Aurors Ron and Harry, and Rose and Scorpius. Look for a series of one-shots in this universe in the future. They will always have Harry and Ginny in them, but will center on how they and Ron and Hermione deal with teenage romance and other parenting problems. I'm glad, too, that you liked the previous chapter. Ron has definitely grown and changed in his attitudes over the plot of this story and it seemed right to have him be the one to mentor Scorpius through his memory. There will be more about Scorpius in future chapters. Thanks so much for leaving reviews when you can. It's always fun to see new reviews as insightful as yours.



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 01:06PM Title: 35: Firsts

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Very nice chapter!!! It was great that Brian got to go to Hogwarts and see his friends and watch Quidditch! Loved that Harry was welcomed back so enthusiastically!!!

Author's Response: Brian and Harry definitely deserve the appreciation and recognition they received in this chapter. It marks the point in their recoveries when they see that they can be part of the real world again. They both still have a way to go and I'll be showing more of their progress in future chapters. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts with me.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 05:15AM Title: 35: Firsts

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