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Reviewer: Silverwolfsm Signed Date: 2011.05.05 - 05:59PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.05.03 - 06:04AM Title: Chapter 3

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This chapter was so perfect. I love what you did with the pranking. And Ankh is one of my favorite characters (?). Anyways, I love the little hint of H/G at the end and I think I might know where you're going to lead them... :] Again, awesome chapter!

Author's Response: I like Ankh as well. :) Thanks for the review. I hope where I lead them is where you expect, but we'll have to see. :-P



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2011.05.03 - 05:36AM Title: Chapter 3

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I love this chapter. It shows that Harry is not the complete idiot with his potion work as Snape made him out to be in canon.

Tracey and Ginny seemed to be able to talk to eachother like sisters. This is great as they both would love to have this type of sibling.

Keep up the good work and I do enjoy reading your updates.

Author's Response: Nope. He doesn't have Snape looking down his neck, so he's learning a lot more. And yes, Tracey and Ginny are like sisters, in a way. Thanks for the review. :)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.05.03 - 05:12AM Title: Chapter 3

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great chapter and an excellent mix
keep up the good work - and I loved ther little tidbit at the end :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :)



Reviewer: beryl Signed Date: 2011.05.02 - 10:24PM Title: Chapter 3

This story keeps getting better. I was almost skeptical that a group of children would train that hard, but mixing in pranks and fun explains that away. Indeed, they'd look forward to it, wouldn't they. But of course they do. Anyway, enough rambling! :) I'm eager to see more of this story, as always.

Author's Response: Yup! The pranks and games to train is the perfect way for kids to train, if you ask me. Thanks for the review. :)



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.05.02 - 04:59PM Title: Chapter 3

well nice to see harry using his brain and also nice to see the twins loss more then just alittle pride this time....they now need to think more and do less....kutgw

Author's Response: *Grins* I'm glad you approve. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2011.05.02 - 11:16AM Title: Chapter 3

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Nice chapter.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.05.02 - 09:24AM Title: Chapter 3

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Good chapter and the training is coming along well. I look forward to when they all get to use it for real.

Author's Response: I would as well, except I know the circumstances surrounding the times they'll actually be using the knowledge. :-/ Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2011.05.02 - 09:23AM Title: Chapter 3

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Only just discovered this series today and am in love!! Never thought I would be this hooked on a story where Harry is in Slytherin but you fantastic ideas have kept me interested and definately wanting more. Simply brilliant chapter too.

Author's Response: I always love hearing how someone isn't the biggest fan of Slytherin Harry, yet they love my version of it. Thanks ever so much for the review. It made me smile. :)



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2011.05.02 - 06:25AM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2011.05.02 - 06:24AM Title: Chapter 3

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