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Reviewer: Grownupron1 Signed Date: 2011.06.07 - 02:46PM Title: Chapter 7


So Ron can hang out with them when no one else can see them. Wow your Harry is a jerk in addition to being suepr powerful. He IS good at using people though.

More and more I'm starting to like the Death Eaters in this.

Author's Response: Maybe that's how you view it. It's different in my mind, but then again, I've got whole plots in my head for this. Still, thanks for the opinion and review. Greatly appreciated.



Reviewer: beryl Signed Date: 2011.06.01 - 06:18PM Title: Chapter 7

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Come on! Seriously! Harry's different, the way he tackles the tasks has to be different. He might do one of them the same way, but I doubt it! That's my theory and I'm sticking with that. Do give me a cookie if I get it right :)

Author's Response: *Grins and hands a cookie* The second Task is a bit hard to change, if you think about it, but you'll see how I make things more unique about it. ;-) Thanks for the review and guess.



Reviewer: Jorgie Signed Date: 2011.06.01 - 01:17PM Title: Chapter 7

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As always a wonderful chapter. I always throughly enjoy reading your story. You are doing wonderful in keeping your characters in character and showing us that they are growing at the same time.

Now I think that in one way the tournament will be different is that Harry will be using his Slythern side. Things will be more logical and thgought out and not rushing forward head first. This is one way in Cedric can be saved, I look eagerly forward to seek.g how you write this. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments. It means quite a lot to get them. As for your view on the Tournament: Interesting comments. I'm not commenting much on ideas, but I like your way of thinking. Thanks so much for the review.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2011.06.01 - 08:06AM Title: Chapter 7

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I think that Harry watching the snitch throughout the match just shows his ability to concentrate on something and not be persuaded from his goal, Just because it is a snitch in a game of quidditch, just shows his interest at that moment.

The conversation between Harry and the Weasleys abouot keeping Ron's friendship quiet, intrigues me at the moment. It could come in very useful.

You will have Harry in the tournament but I'm not sure how. That is one of the reasons you are writing this wonderful story and not me.

KUTGW.

Author's Response: Oh, believe me, that conversation is the beginning of a bit of a subplot. ;-) Keep it in mind. Thanks for the review! :)



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2011.05.31 - 11:07PM Title: Chapter 7

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I like that Harry was more interested in the Snitch, then the Veela. I think it has more to do with Ginny then he may admit to.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :)



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.05.31 - 12:35PM Title: Chapter 7

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Sometimes I think you may be making it a little too easy for Harry. Everything seems to go to plan with very few setbacks. But then again, that certainly makes a change from the usual angst ridden Harry.

Author's Response: In a way you're right, but at the same time, he hasn't had to deal with all that canon Harry did as he's more cautious. Trust me, I have him going through hard times during this story. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.05.31 - 11:44AM Title: Chapter 7

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great chapter as always, a clever way of changing the GoF perspective by having Ron be accused of setting off the Dark Mark

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was clever. Thanks for the review. :)



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2011.05.31 - 06:14AM Title: Chapter 7

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Great work, Miz. I found the way Draco was acting rather intruiging - it was like he didn't know which way to go.

Author's Response: In a way he doesn't. You'll probably enjoy the chapter I have to begin the summer after fourth year, but we'll have to see. Thanks for the second review. :-P



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2011.05.31 - 04:53AM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2011.05.30 - 11:43PM Title: Chapter 7

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Okay, as for the tournament....if you have Cedric in it as well as Harry, PLEASE don't kill him!

Author's Response: I make no comments on that. Maybe he lives, maybe he doesn't. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.05.30 - 05:52PM Title: Chapter 7

well harry is right and soon they will see it all in light as for the mark well at lease harry got the lesson and draco really needs to think more and more about which act to play when....kutgw

Author's Response: Mhmm. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.05.30 - 02:51PM Title: Chapter 7

These smallish chapters are somewhat disappointing...ah well. Something is better than nothing. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I truly didn't even realize they WERE smaller until people started commenting on it in reviews. In my mind, they're good sized chapters with how short and long they could be. I aim to be over 3500 words, usually trying to hit 4000, if I can. Sometimes they're longer, but never shorter than 3500, not since the early chapters of BA. Still, I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review. :)



Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2011.05.30 - 02:49PM Title: Chapter 7

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Great chapter, I thik the kids not going and fightng is the right thing, they are still 13-14 not ready to realy fight adults yet. looking forward to them getting back to school and seeing what you do with the tournament. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I'm glad you approved. Thanks for the review. :)



Reviewer: Milarqui Signed Date: 2011.05.30 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter 7

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An excellent chapter! Showing how Harry is so good at tracking the Snitch, far better than the professionals in the game, was a nice touch to the whole match! :D

I bet Ron will be quite useful for the future, since he isn't connected to Harry as Ginny and the Twins are.

As for the Tournament, it could go more or less as in the books, but changing when Harry gets chosen as the fourth champion. Given that he will probably (if he hasn't done it yet) tell all the members of the group that, although it could be nice, he doesn't plan to join the Tournament, it would change everything, because Harry's friends would easily spread the word that he couldn't have joined, given that: (a) It is quite weird that Harry was chosen for some unknown school, (b) Harry has made it clear that he doesn't want to join and (c) There's always the chance that some Death Eater could have done that in an attempt to kill him.

Author's Response: Thanks for the long review and your opinions on what might be coming. I've gotta say, you had some good points there, though I'm not saying whether you are correct or not. Very interesting to read, though. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and liked my little touches on various ideas. :)




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