Reviews For Return of an Alpha
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2011.08.25 - 01:28AM Title: Chapter 19
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.08.24 - 03:53PM Title: Chapter 19 well i have to say that harry and the rest need to think how to help each other out on the task now that they know the prize inside...as for beathing hopefully harrys other crew will have it in spades soon enough....kutgw Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2011.08.24 - 03:40PM Title: Chapter 19 Very interesting getting Theo and Tracey together! I also like how they found out early about the next task. Reviewer: seaswimmer Signed Date: 2011.08.24 - 02:32PM Title: Chapter 19 Well done. You're right: your story, your ideas - and your voice too. I noticed a couple of chapters back that you'd written a similar set of events to JKR's, but had done it your way (sorry, I should have said something then, but I'm a useles reviewer...) - really good to see, keep it up (school permitting!) Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2011.08.24 - 01:48PM Title: Chapter 19 This was fun and the Tracy/Theo part was well written. Thanks, looking forward to the ball in 2 weeks :) Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.08.24 - 11:49AM Title: Chapter 19 Good, well resolved, chapter. Thanks. Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.08.24 - 11:05AM Title: Chapter 19 excellent chapter | |||||||
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