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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.09.19 - 09:01AM Title: Chapter 24
yeah, a lovely fun chapter
they've definatly got a good weapon in Sebae
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.09.18 - 10:59AM Title: Chapter 24
Just checking the end of this chapter before reading the latest update. I thought I had left a review saying I thought Harry was being reasonable in not worrying the girls about being used in the challenge. Mind must be going!
Reviewer: Moxterminator Signed Date: 2011.09.17 - 05:38PM Title: Chapter 24
Hey love your work, cant wait for the next chapter tommrow :D
so happy that your updaiting twice a week at the moment.
hope it contionues for a while :)
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2011.09.16 - 09:20AM Title: Chapter 24
That was a great filler chapter.
The only critism I have of your story is, knowing that you don't do fluff very well...It doesn't even seem that Harry and Ginny are together as they don't even hold hands or act like thay are together.
Please keep updating your great story.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.09.16 - 08:47AM Title: Chapter 24
Well they are making head way and the girls need to remeber it's Harry in the fight not them....they don't have a leg to stand on.....kutgw
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2011.09.15 - 11:10PM Title: Chapter 24
Here's the one typo I spotted:
“I’ll be useful, that’s for sure,” he agreed, ideas of how it would be useful already zooming around in his mind. “I wonder if I can still understand and talk to you while I’m transformed…”
I do believe you meant "It'll be useful..."
