Reviews For Return of an Alpha
Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.12.09 - 11:04AM Title: Chapter 48 It's pretty far down on the page and this isn't the most technical piece to go by, but it does say that Snape is the only one who can produce a patronus. http://www.the-leaky-cauldron.org/2007/7 /30/j-k-rowling-web-chat-transcript I'm sure there are other sources that confirm this too, this is just the one I found first. Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 10:44PM Title: Chapter 48 I like how your showing the different perspectives now. One thing I wanted to point out, and you have every right to change this because this story is so completely AU, but JK said that the only death eater who could successfully produce a patronus was Snape, and that's because he wasn't actually evil. So at the part where Lucius wasn't worried about the dementors being a problem because the group of death eaters each knew how to produce a patronus, it's canonly incorrect. But feel free to write it how you want it. :] Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 12:52PM Title: Chapter 48 Why can't Fred and George turn Umbrige into a toad - permanently? I liked the view point of the death eaters - that was very well done. Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 12:10PM Title: Chapter 48 Thanks for this chapter! I applaud your decision to show that break out. I've never before seen it depicted from the DE point of view. (That brief scene in the movie doesn't count!) Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 09:24AM Title: Chapter 48 yeah, definatly chilling to read about Voldy in action :) Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 06:46AM Title: Chapter 48 Most of this story has been centred on Harry and his preparations, so it made a good change to see what Voldemort is up to. | |||||||
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