Reviews For Foolish
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.09.13 - 05:29PM Title: Chapter 5 I knew it! I knew it! As soon as Luna mentioned helping another friend to visit who had become a citizen I thought of Harry. Can Nell have worked out that Harry is the man Ginny was previously been involved with or, I'm presuming Harry is the best friend she mentioned of her husbands who would be trading muggle stories, has Harry mentioned Ginny and she has realised the connection? Reviewer: Stephanie O Signed Date: 2012.02.14 - 12:53AM Title: Chapter 5 Thank goodness for Luna! I loved 'her' creatures, especially the one that let her know Ginny's pregnant. I wondered if Harry was the 'other old friend' Luna let visit, and sure enough, it looks like he was. I wonder why Nell was so shocked to find out Luna "sponsored" her? I can't wait to find out more about Hastom--it sounds like a place where miracles can happen! :) Reviewer: Dando Signed Date: 2011.09.19 - 03:46PM Title: Chapter 5 Have just discovered this story and its really good. When are we having an update? Reviewer: Abjured Signed Date: 2011.09.13 - 10:52PM Title: Chapter 5 I haven't reviewed in a while and just wanted to show my continued support. You're doing an awesome job keeping me surprised and wanting more, which is hard to do considering the amount of HP fanfiction I've read. Please keep up the exemplary work! Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed Date: 2011.09.11 - 01:18AM Title: Chapter 5 I am loving this story so far and just wanted to drop you a line of encouragement about it. You got my vote for the New Story category in the Awards this month, and I hope you stick with it (I appreciate the pace of the updates so far!). A story that starts out this sad really has to find its way to completion! I think I can see where you're ultimately heading with this, but the path to get there could go many different ways before finally reaching its destination. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it! Reviewer: The_readhead Signed Date: 2011.09.06 - 02:12AM Title: Chapter 5 sorry for the third post but your author responses are a bit um...for the lack of a better word putting off. Despite all my apprehensions I do find the story gripping. Honestly, one of the reasons is that you are posting it on SIYE...so as a reader I have the satisfaction of knowing that the author won't keep my favorite couple apart on a whim and the angsty journey here will have a somewhat satisfying resolution. But when you say things like h/g 'may (or may not) get together, I feel you are going against what the site stands for. I am sorry, I love the site, hence the post. Obviously if the mods are letting you post it here, it means you are sticking to the rules, I just wish you wouldn't try to add more drama by hinting at possible endings with both going their separate ways and if that's the case perhaps you should re-consider where you are posting it. I would personally feel let down if I found a story like that here. Reviewer: LEJ418 Signed Date: 2011.09.05 - 10:54PM Title: Chapter 5 I am truly loving this story. I like to save the updated chapters as a special treat to reward myself for getting things done. I think your ideas are both oringial and creative, I've read a lot of fanfiction so I find it refreshing to nice to something more than just the same old things getting rehashed. Thank you so much. I literally squealed a little when I read that you saved the updates as a reward given that's it something that I've done myself a few hundred times.. Luna has a fifty percent chance of being right about the baby as do you and Ginny. You'll find out at some point for sure. I'm rewatching Star Wars with my nephew right now and I'm finding myself falling in love with it all over again. I remember being around his age when the movies were rereleased in theaters in the nineties and being just as blown away by it as he is now. So, yes, Bart became a huge Star Wars fan in the story. But he was gonna be kind of a nerd anyways, as you'll see. There's no plans for Luna to be plotting anything but she is a Ravenclaw and those birds do operate on a different wavelength than the rest of us. We'll find out together if she has anything else up her sleeve.Reviewer: Green Eyes Signed Date: 2011.09.05 - 05:17PM Title: Chapter 5 Nice job. This chapter was an enjoyable and unexpected turn in the road. Reviewer: potionsprofessor Signed Date: 2011.09.05 - 11:45AM Title: Chapter 5 I just discovered your story and I am loving it ! I can't wait until the next chapter. Thanks. Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.09.05 - 09:55AM Title: Chapter 5 lol! can't wait for the next chapter - and some more angst of course :) Reviewer: dseay Signed Date: 2011.09.05 - 09:26AM Title: Chapter 5 Go Luna, you have got to love her! Now this is getting interesting amd we have to wait for an update? I do love how you brought in a little humor to break up the angst for a bit because it was getting a little to depressing. This story is so fasinating and I do love your writning skills, keep up the excellent work. Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.09.05 - 08:41AM Title: Chapter 5 Ooh, fascinating turn of events. If Ginny really thought about things, she would realize that someone who was truly content wouldn't have vials of Sleeping Draught lying around. I'm guessing that if Healer Nixon and her husband are such good friends with Harry, they know the whole story. So, the question is - did Healer Nixon know all along who Ginny was? Doesn't seem to, since she only put 2 and 2 together as Ginny was opening the door. Luna is such a hoot and treasures her friends. I'm wishing the next chapter was up already, so I could find out what happens next. Thank you so much! My use of the word "content" seems to be causing some controversy so I'll clarify my thinking a little bit. When I see the word "content" I do imagine happy but more settled happy, not overjoyed happy or can't stop smiling happy. And you're right. IMO, someone who has complete happiness in their grasp wouldn't need a Sleeping Draught every night. ;-) As for what Nell and her husband, Bart, know, I'll let them explain the particulars in the next chapter. I had to work Luna Lovegood in somewhere. Just had to. She's one of JKR's crown jewels. In my mind, yeah she's the kind of friend that would upend your entire life if she thought it would be good for you. Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2011.09.05 - 08:03AM Title: Chapter 5 I'm happy for Ginny, because despite the awkwardness of meeting Harry, she at least found healer Nixon and that is a real relief of her burden, having someone she is able to talk to. Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2011.09.05 - 06:54AM Title: Chapter 5 That was a great chapter! What a cliffhanger! Thanks for writing. Reviewer: borokat Signed Date: 2011.09.04 - 10:21PM Title: Chapter 5 I know that this is not going to be a lot of readers cups of tea, but I am really liking the chances that you are taking here. This is different, and honestly, if you were a lesser author, I would have given it up. But this is so well-written, that it has drawn me in. Looking forward to the next chapter! Reviewer: The_readhead Signed Date: 2011.09.04 - 01:40PM Title: Chapter 5 The Hanstom place is nice, Luna was fun to read...but my main grouses with your story still remain. Ginny is getting better to read too, but I think if I leave out the first two chapters of the story, I'd find Ginny better written than she is. Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.09.04 - 01:10PM Title: Chapter 5 I like this Hastom place. Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2011.09.04 - 09:16AM Title: Chapter 5 Now that's an interesting meeting. | |||||||
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