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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2012.03.06 - 11:57AM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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aww, beautiful chapter :)



Reviewer: AoiKazeToMidoriAme Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 04:54AM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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Hey, I have just discovered this story and I am so very impressed. It is a really powerful one I think that feels real without being too dramatic. This chapter in particular (7) was quite good. Well, to be honest, the last several have had me riveted and impressed. I am so glad to have found a great new author on ff. About this chapter, it honestly resolved the relationship in such a way, so neatly, that it felt like the end of the story, that everything was solved. I think it was fantastic, though I was surprised to see that it went on. I am sure there are more twists and future that will be grand. While i loved it, I do kind of think, "where is the story going from here, it is perfect as it is." It stands on its own. I think as an author you will have to work on setting us up for more story. To me though, really chapter 8 felt like an epilogue. Where is it going from here? Is it nearly done and is there a sequel? Does it stop now or continue on into Hogwartz? I can't wait to read more and I absolutely, positively LOVED your characterization of Harry in this story. You did a brilliant and masterful job. Please, keep up the good work, can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: What a great review! Thank you for your kind words and your thoughts on my style. AIT is currently about 15 chapters long so I do have a few more plot twists up my sleeve, and they have been interwoven into the previous chapters. No sequel, though. Stephen King once said "I try to create sympathy for my characters, then turn the monsters loose." And I've taken this to heart. A good writer can create characters the reader loves, and then has the will to hurt them. So while, things might seem all happily-ever-after, not to worry, I do have an agenda. My goal was to create a more realistic story about Harry and Ginny who want to be together, but who have had such terrible things happen in their lives that its made it difficult. While I love stories that are post-DH and fluffy, I wanted to do something different from the writers who made Harry immediately declare his love for Ginny and start their happily-ever-after. Its cute, but I don't think it would have happened. Thank you again for your thoughts and your really wonderful comments. This review put a big smile on my face, and I've got a big exam in a few hours, so I needed that! I will DEFINITELY keep your words in mind as I continue writing this piece. I'll hopefully be updating in the next week or so! --Summer :)



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.12.13 - 11:27AM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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Common sense comes to the fore.

Author's Response: It was time haha. Thanks for keeping with this story! I appreciate all your reviews! :)



Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl Signed Date: 2011.11.29 - 10:22PM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

Overall very good! I'm not much of a reader (or reviewer for that matter), but I actually read through the whole thing so yay you held my attention! Many times I get started and quit because it's just too out there to finish.

Thanks for the great story.



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2011.11.13 - 08:33AM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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excellet

Author's Response: Thank you!!



Reviewer: redandblack Signed Date: 2011.11.08 - 10:27PM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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I loved, so happy they are together now :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! Haha, me too. Writing angst can get depressing.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.11.08 - 05:28PM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

well I'm glad that they finally got back together...it was time and then some.....they now need an island and get the rest of the garbage out in the open and move on...kutgw

Author's Response: there's always a limit to how much angst one can stomach before it starts to give even the writer a headache. Thank you for all your reviews so far :)



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.11.08 - 04:18PM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author 's Response: :) Thanks for reviewing !!!!!!!



Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2011.11.08 - 03:56PM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.11.08 - 11:38AM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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yay! I love that they're back together! I'm glad Harry finally find his....um...yeah... lol!

Author's Response: lol. Glad you're enjoying it so far. All good things come with time :) Thanks for reviewing!!



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.11.08 - 10:38AM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

Lovely chapter. Love the teasing and the ease between the two of them. It almost seems too easy and anti-climactic after all they've been through, though. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review!! And as for this being 'too easy' and 'anti-climatic,' I'm not done with them yet :P



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2011.11.08 - 08:07AM Title: Chapter 7: Saying the Most Complicated Simple Thing

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This was a very nicely done reunion between Harry & Ginny. After all the angst and problems the fact that they both wanted this finally did it. Hopefully it will be (fairly!) smooth sailing for the two of them, now.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I must have wrote and re-wrote this moment several times before I settled with this version. I didn't want it to be too mushy or overly complicated, and I had trouble with some of my dialogue. Harry isn't a romance-novel type man who always get everything right. He's a guy- a simple guy- he's been through a lot, and he's still got a ways to go. He knows he wants to be with Ginny, and that's that. Thanks again for reviewing!!




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