Reviews For Twenty-Two
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.11.08 - 08:34AM Title: Chapter 2
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.11.08 - 08:34AM Title: One
Reviewer: lisa1312 Signed Date: 2018.09.14 - 02:30AM Title: Chapter 2
For a story like this. I would have liked it if Ginny got mad
Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2012.01.02 - 11:37AM Title: Chapter 2
So glad you did another chapter. I think Ginny was just a stubborn as Harry in this. However, Harry should have fought for her a long time ago. Hope to see Ginny's side in this.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2012.01.02 - 04:26AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, I sincerely hope this story doesn't end here! There's too much uncertainty and possibly final happiness for Harry and Ginny to end the story with Ginny making the request she's just made. I want to know what made her change her mind, why she seems not to want to marry Jordan after all. Please don't end the story here. I need closure!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2012.01.02 - 03:40AM Title: One
Seeing as though you've put up a second chapter, I'd say you decided not to end the story here. I'm glad you haven't, mostly because you've left many loose ends as to why Ginny would just throw him out of her flat like that. After all, she is Molly Weasley's daughter and the Weasley women have never been silent. I'm off to see what happens in chapter 2.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2012.01.01 - 07:37AM Title: Chapter 2
beautiful chapter - well done!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.12.31 - 05:32AM Title: Chapter 2
The writing is great and a happy ending I think. But it still all seemed a little contrived.
Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2011.12.30 - 10:06PM Title: Chapter 2
Reviewer: TrainzStoffe Signed Date: 2011.12.30 - 05:35PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh... oh...! Oh yeah! Awesome! I was wondering how you'd dig yourself out of this one, so happy you did it. Love the new chapter (hated the first one... but yeah, not because it was bad or nothing, just...y'know... ) - Good job, good read! Thank you.
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.12.30 - 05:14PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow....soooooo much better than the first chapter you posted. I still find it hard to believe that their friends and family wouldn't have stepped in at some point when they were being too stubborn for their own good, but I'm so glad they managed to get through to Harry before Ginny's wedding.
Reviewer: r3in9 Signed Date: 2011.12.11 - 04:31AM Title: One
20 years is too long. I really don't much enjoy stories like this. Good writing though but really, I don't believe (like some of them) that after 12 years they won't find love especially when it was a teenage romance.
Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2011.12.10 - 05:01AM Title: One
I agree with all who've reviewed so far. It's reading stories like the one you've started here that makes me glad that J K Rowling's version of HP cannon was the real one.
Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 11:23PM Title: One
It's very difficult to believe that these characters are from Rowling's novels because they don't act like the Harry and Ginny we know. Harry is the epitome of brave and couragous yet he was scared of telling Ginny how he felt when she had indicated that she felt the same at the Battle of Hogwarts? If he had acted like this, Ginny would have moved on and been married to someone desirable before she was 25--not engaged finally at 39 years old!
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 05:31PM Title: One
I need back story: just how did Harry not end up with Ginny after the battle? I can't believe Harry was scared of her brothers!
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 03:56PM Title: One
For what its worth, I think ending it there makes sense. This isn't a story where its been months or even short years. Harry waited for 25 years. People change and move on--and that happening here seems real. Its more difficult for me to imagine her forgiving him and accepting him back into her life as anything more than as a friend.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 11:37AM Title: One
I like the writing, but I have to say I find the storyline not very real. Waiting for twenty years doing nothing and then telling Ginny he loves her just before her wedding does not sound like Harry
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 09:07AM Title: One
it's a H/G site - you can't just leave it there
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.12.08 - 07:33AM Title: One
Reviewer: Sir Ollivander Signed Date: 2011.12.06 - 10:04PM Title: One
Using the F-word is an automatic R rating.