Reviews For The Noble and Most Ancient House of Grey
Reviewer: sapphire200182 Signed Date: 2012.03.01 - 09:21PM Title: Chapter 1
Job well done, with mostly interesting 'magical abilities' and a decent-enough twist to the tale (making the title undesirable to hold). Perhaps that's part of the reason why Sirius was disdainful of the title in OotP. I felt the story lacked a bit of suspense as all the plot needed was for Luna to explain everything.
Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 02:06PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice! That was an excellent twist at the end. Well done :-)
Reviewer: quinn Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 01:40PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice short story. You did a great job planting hints to where you were going - Dumblebore in the kitchens, etc. Good luck in the challenge!
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 02:22AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting idea so far. I just can't see them being so nosy about a letter a friend received. Wouldn't it have been more in line for them to at least ask Neville first before they go investigating him. It just seemed to me to be overly intrusive.
Reviewer: jennkaye Signed Date: 2012.02.16 - 08:17PM Title: Chapter 2
Lovely beginning. Is the story going to have a conclusion, or is it one of those stories that leaves a reader wondering what happened?
Reviewer: Miz636 Signed Date: 2012.02.16 - 05:38PM Title: Chapter 2
I loved Luna the most in this story. The way she actually knew what was going on and shocked the others with her knowledge was amusing and well done and just plain Luna. Your choice of Dumbledore at the end was also fun, though the moment you began to show the end with him it became obvious, but you kept it well hidden up until then. Overall, a good story. Thanks for the read. :)
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 04:42PM Title: Chapter 2
that would be something albus would be the holder of....but another mystery solved and soon luna will have more to talk about with them....but i think its great to see her interact with them more.....kutgw
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2012.01.30 - 01:56PM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.01.29 - 11:00PM Title: Chapter 2
Reviewer: ladymblack Signed Date: 2012.01.28 - 10:15PM Title: Chapter 2
That was such a cool story, even if I would have liked a bit more at the end. I wondered where you were going for a while, since they seemed to be concentrating on the House of Longbottom, but it was really interesting how you introduced the House of Grey and where it went. I would have to assume that the line would die with Aberforth. Although there are some rare circumstances where a direct male descendent will have a different last name, it's very rare. And, as far as we're aware, they were the only ones, and both childless. I can honestly say that I wouldn't mind another chapter, maybe to tie up loose ends? Regardless, it was brilliant!
Reviewer: Chocolate Fish Signed Date: 2012.01.28 - 08:28PM Title: Chapter 2
That was quite interesting, I look forward to reading more as you write it. I wonder who Dumbledore's heir will be, or if he even has one (which I suspect he doesn't)
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.01.28 - 07:42PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmm. Curious. Luna was great.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.01.28 - 06:03PM Title: Chapter 2
I do not know what is going on, but I like it.
Reviewer: Albus H Potter Signed Date: 2012.01.28 - 05:09PM Title: Chapter 1
Story not bad, rating low becouse its more G/D ship than H/G
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2012.01.28 - 03:40PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved Luna. Wrackspurts, ha!
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2012.01.28 - 03:28PM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: mwinter Signed Date: 2012.01.27 - 07:44PM Title: Chapter 1
So Sirius is dead who's the head of the house of Black, Harry or Draco?
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.01.27 - 06:54AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting introduction, but I have no idea where this is going. Waiting for more.
Reviewer: yentila22 Signed Date: 2012.01.27 - 12:04AM Title: Chapter 1
Your story has me intrigued. I'm looking forward to reading more.