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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.05.31 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 5: Cradlesong
Very sweet. I liked the part from Conner's pov.
Author's Response: I am in love with writing Connor. I will definitely do it when I can. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2012.03.09 - 10:53PM Title: Chapter 5: Cradlesong
Oh, I love that you gave Connor a POV. He's such a cute little guy. I love that he talks to his daddy Sirius, and I love seeing Harry interact with him. The animals noises were sweet, especially what they created for the stag.
I also enjoyed Seph's convo with Seamus. I can really see him getting into the bartender type role. This is great work. I look forward to seeing more of the mystery around the brewary you've mentioned.
Author's Response: Connor will have his chance to talk again. He's got a good head on his shoulders even at his tender age. His parents don't want him to forget his birth father, so they encourage him talking to him. Since Seph knows Sirius hears Connor, she wants to keep it up. Harry loves Connor like a brother, something wonderful for Harry. I definitely think Seamus has embraced the "bar keep" persona very well. We'll see more of it in the future. MNF
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.03.07 - 12:55PM Title: Chapter 5: Cradlesong
A lot of interesting bits. Just a nice chapter to read. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks. Things will begin happening now.
MNF
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.03.07 - 07:07AM Title: Chapter 5: Cradlesong
Lovely chapter. Connor's POV was a great change from the 'adult' POV's. He seems like such a cute kid trying to help Teddy with the animal sounds. You have his speech down well.
Charlie and Seph's talk about the dragons was cute as well.
Author's Response: Kids see things in different ways, hence sometimes we need to see the world through their eyes. I have a very soft spot for Connor, who is patterned after my numerous nephews. Charlie is a good guy, completely in love with his wife. Sometimes a woman needs to hear it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2012.03.06 - 06:35PM Title: Chapter 5: Cradlesong
Connor is absolutely adorable! I love how he's trying so hard to be a good "big brother" to Teddy and teach him all sorts of animal sounds. It's also precious that he wants to talk to Daddy Sirius. The bench art sounds wonderful and having the boys imitate the dog and wolf sounds really got to me, especially when they invented the sound for Prongs. Great chapter, Feathers! Please send me six no matter what time you finish it!
Author's Response: I have a soft spot for toddlers, as I used to teach them. The way they interact with one another is precious, especially for one who perceives himself as older. I promise I'll send them regardless of my finishing time.
MNFeathers
