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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.05.31 - 09:26PM Title: Chapter 11: My Boy Builds Coffins

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Great chapter - I like the name. Kuddos to your daughter for her research :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Naming children is always so hard, it's great when I can get others involved. Much better than what the same daughter wanted to name her little sister fifteen years ago. If we'd listened to her, we'd have a daughter name Big-Bird. MNF



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2012.05.12 - 10:37AM Title: Chapter 11: My Boy Builds Coffins

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Beautiful chapter in many ways.
The way you told the legend of Orion and his dogs was gorgeous. Same goes for the reasoning behind using the name Suzannah for baby gurl number 2 ;)
Loved the humouristic banter between Justin & Dean. I love your use of secondary characters anyway. So many never even mention them.
Ron's bum.....well....there is a mental picture. Otter Paws? Really? ROFLOL

Author's Response: Thanks so much. The amount of mythology I have learned from writing these stories is unbelievable. I'm so glad when I get to use it. Secondary characters are fun, since they don't have much personality to need to work within. I find them far more refreshing to work with. Yeah, lets just leave Ron's bum out of my mind, okay. Thanks for making me smile, MNF



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.04.11 - 01:08PM Title: Chapter 11: My Boy Builds Coffins

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Like the translated name. All at sea as to what is going on at the breweries.

Author's Response: I liked it too! My daughter rocks for finding it for me. Ah, the mystery is still befuddling people. Harry and Ginny's wedding prep is coming up, so the next few chapters are fluffy or angsty. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF




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