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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.05.31 - 11:26PM Title: Chapter 15: The Things You Said
Hmm, I was thinking at first one of her estranged family members, now I'm thinking possibly a LeStrange relative. Very interesting.
Author's Response: Hmmmm, interesting theories. You're just going to need to keep on reading.
MNF
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2012.05.16 - 04:12AM Title: Chapter 15: The Things You Said
Mmmm, riddled with clues but I am none the wiser. Transfigurations Master. Definitely Old Blood/old school. Older. He doesn't know what a patronus is. Talks about rumours and what he learned from the papers. Vague about dark or light but certainly a pureblood wizard. Disdain for lower wizards and muggles. Mmmmm....
Author's Response: Ah, you caught up on some of the clues, but not all of them. Makes you ponder, ponder, ponder. You of course know my standard answer to reviews like yours...just keep reading. MNF
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2012.05.07 - 12:40AM Title: Chapter 15: The Things You Said
Obviously this person is delusional and dangerous; I happen to volunteer at the perfect hospital for such a sick soul...
You had two misused words in this chapter:
Who cared about how one bloom tasted verses another? That should be versus.
All those magical friends of his, coming to his aide quickly. That should be aid.
Author's Response: Definitely a little unbalanced. Could use some med changes. Thanks for picking up the words, things slip by my betas eyes and mine.
MNF
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.05.02 - 02:04PM Title: Chapter 15: The Things You Said
It has to be one of Seph`s obnoxious relatives (I am thinking a male). I can see the next chapter is there but is not validated yet. I hate it when that happens.
Author's Response: The next chapter is up now. Interesting theory, you're going to have to wait and see. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF
Reviewer: amber101709 Signed Date: 2012.05.02 - 10:10AM Title: Chapter 15: The Things You Said
Wow! That was just a little creepy. I am soooo glad the children are okay. Update soon the suspense is killing me!
Author's Response: It was more than a little creepy, but a blast to write! The kids are fine, I'm not heartless. The next chapter is in the queue. Thanks for reviewing, MNF
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.05.02 - 08:20AM Title: Chapter 15: The Things You Said
What an evil 'son of a b&$*#'.
He seems to have a big problem when it come to Seph and all of those around her. While I haven't worked out who it is, you have certainly given me some ideas.
I loved the story you wrote, 'In the Blood' and I am glad you are writting a sequel. I can't wait for it to be up to read.
Author's Response: Don't hold back there, tell me what you really feel. I'd love to hear your theories on who it is. We have met the person already, just to help.
The sequel is "Lord Potter's Own Will" and will start this week. Come see me on Facebook for a preview.
MNF
