Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2012.08.22 - 09:04PM
Title: Chapter 30: Shake It Out
Great mysterious chapter. My suspicions are flying from one person to another and then somewhere else.
Someone who has brothers, death eater connections and is very wealthy. Very curious.
Author's Response: Glad you think so. All will be made clear soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2012.08.21 - 01:20PM
Title: Chapter 30: Shake It Out
I now know why my original suspicions seemed to grow more unlikely with latter attacks. There is an original pair and then the Tormentor with death eater connections. Patrick obviously recognises a relative he has lived with for a long while.
Author's Response: Yes, you're right. The less diabolical of the attacks were the original pair and the Tormentor was responsible for the worse ones. The rest of it I will not comment on, as I won't give secrets away. Thanks for sharing it though. MNF
Reviewer: stark40763 Signed
Date: 2012.08.21 - 10:13AM
Title: Chapter 30: Shake It Out
So, I'm guessing that the two patsies are Seph's sister & her husband, while the Mastermind is a third, unknown Lestrange brother. Also, the thought of Bella learning Forensics is intriguing, and just a bit scary.
Author's Response: I wholeheartedly agree Bella knowing forensics, especially when other magical folks don't, is terrifying. I'm not commenting on theories, but thanks so much for sharing them. I love seeing what people think. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF