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Reviews For The Emerald Army

Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2013.01.07 - 05:36PM Title: Acknowledgement

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Great story and thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: yentila22 Signed Date: 2012.07.04 - 02:20PM Title: Acknowledgement

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I really like your work. I just wish there was more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Make sure to check out the other stories in the 'Family of Harry Potter' series.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.05.27 - 04:33PM Title: Acknowledgement

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Very, very sweet. The speech was very Harry. Great ending and I'm glad she got acknowledgement for what she did :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.05.26 - 05:52PM Title: Acknowledgement

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Nice to see the others honoured and Harry getting to do it. I also liked his speech and agree with his sentiments.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review



Reviewer: Abraxan Signed Date: 2012.05.18 - 01:55PM Title: Acknowledgement

The whole story seemed very "bare bones." You had an interesting concept and plot and you kept all the characters in character except for Harry. I can't see him ever sounding like a TV announcer saying 'Give it up for Ron Weasley!" or anything like that. I CAN see him doing the awards, but in a completely different tone. I enjoyed the Ginny/Snape interaction and Ginny finding Lily's picture, but I can't imagine Snape taking such a chance with Death Eaters in the castle - having a picture of Lily and Harry Potter on his desk would just get him in trouble and he's too careful for that.

I think you show promise as a writer. Try to develop your characters and plot more and keep them in character. Good luck with your future writing!

Abraxan

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I'll try to keep your tips in mind.



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2012.05.17 - 12:03AM Title: Acknowledgement

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A well-crafted story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the Review



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.05.07 - 04:26AM Title: Acknowledgement

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This last chapter seemed a bit rushed. Overall. It was a good story and good luck for the challenge.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.05.05 - 01:25PM Title: Acknowledgement

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I have to say I am slightly disappointed. I thought you could have developed the activities of the Emerald Army to a much greater extent. Keep writing but try to add a bit more flesh to the stories.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'll try to keep that in mind for my future stories.




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