Reviews For Alone
Reviewer: Hamilton Signed Date: 2014.09.12 - 12:45PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings Very good story, nice twist on the 'canon' magical world ;-) Reviewer: Old guy Signed Date: 2012.09.17 - 10:42AM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings I am only a few chapters into the story, but it is the most original, and interesting story I have seen lately. It is a completely pleasant read, void of the usual grammar and spelling errors, misused words, and strange ideas about the characters. Thanks for the effort, and I look forward to more stories. Reviewer: emmy_kent Signed Date: 2012.05.28 - 07:23PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings This is one awesome story, I've read a lot of HP stories and this is the most intriguing by far. For the life of me, I can't figure out where this all leading and how Harry's and Ginny's relationship fit in to all this (Even with the prologue). Can't wait for more. Excellent AU story. Completely different from most AU stories out there. Great job. Reviewer: sonotawriter Signed Date: 2012.05.14 - 04:28PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings No Review Reviewer: Manatoc Fox Signed Date: 2012.05.14 - 02:25PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings A little confused about the beginning, but I'm hoping this isn't too dark. I like how you disappeared Harry though. Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed Date: 2012.05.08 - 06:03PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings VERY interesting first chapter. I took a guess as to the Dark Lay's identity (based on this website), and guessed right. I also guessed that a basilisk was involved once mandrake root was mentioned. My next guess is that a lot of non-canon stuff is going to be happening before the rest of the story catches up to the prologue in 1996 (the easiest guess of all). Reviewer: gryffins_door Signed Date: 2012.05.07 - 09:41AM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings Nice beginning - it seems to be something of a dark comedy (Death Eatresses?); I assume the Pirates of the Caribbean reference is intentional. My guess is that Ginny was possessed by the diary Horcrux to become the Dark Lady, an insurrectionist among insurrectionists. Some odd canon twists in your AU seem to be well thought out, and some very insightful scenes into how things may have developed in canon. KUTGW Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.05.02 - 08:55PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings Fascinating beginning. I'm not sure I like Ginny being cast as a Dark Lady, but I can't wait to see where you take it. My only comment is when Arthur is telling Molly about what happened, they seemed to know the Potters very well - is this part of your AU? Very interested to see what happens. Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.05.02 - 05:03PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings Definitely a different beginning. I wasn't surprised the Ginny is the Dark Lady. It will be interesting to see what led up to that and why Harry fled the Dursleys and how come the letter couldn't find him. And, oh, so many other questions. Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2012.05.02 - 10:21AM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings not sure I like the idea of Ginny being a Dark Lady but maybe that was just one possible future and we'll be seeing that change. Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.05.02 - 06:01AM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings
Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2012.05.01 - 06:38PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings Interesting premise. Look forward to where you take us... Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.05.01 - 06:13PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings well now thats a hell of a start now i can't wait to see what you got up ur sleeve next...kutgw Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2012.05.01 - 04:07PM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings Strong beginning. You have left us lots of questions and I look forward to finding out some or all of the answers in the future. Reviewer: Green Eyes Signed Date: 2012.05.01 - 11:49AM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings An interesting beginning; particularly the lead-up to the battle and the parley. The Dark Lady? Nice. I am interested to see how that came to be. Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.05.01 - 11:45AM Title: Chapter One: Beginnings and Endings There is a lot of this story missing, but it looks like it will develope into a unique tale. | |||||||
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