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Reviewer: Kallandra Signed Date: 2013.10.11 - 02:08AM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
I like this story! :D
The rabbit-skinning seems overly simple for a child finding a wild animal, and the magic was a bit too accessible for me, but I like the idea. It'll be interesting to see how the story gets to the point it was in the beginning.
Reviewer: flamel Signed Date: 2012.05.10 - 06:08PM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
I really like the different spin on this story. Completely unique and quite entertaining.
But why is it taking SIYE so long to validate each chapter??
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.05.10 - 12:41PM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
This just gets better and better. It is all very different.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.05.09 - 06:44AM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
I'm glad that Harry didn't enter Malfoy Manor. Imagine him being confronted by Lucius!!! Horror thought.
The parents of the muggleborns seem like they are a bit stuck in the machinations of a corrupt ministry.
Dumbledore is certainly missed in this universe.
What is next.....
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.05.09 - 12:51AM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
Very interesting background chapter. How horrible for the parents of the Muggleborns - I can easily see the Ministry doing something like that. It is interesting to see an empowered and outgoing Neville though I find it hard to believe that Hermione would immediately think that breaking the rules would be great. The only thing that seemed really off was Ron's first letter. Is he illiterate? He could spell foot and ball but not football? That just seemed really off - compound words aren't difficult even if you aren't familiar with them.
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.05.08 - 09:55PM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
Nasty about the house stealing. Amazing that Wizards can live in Muggle neighborhoods, but parents of Muggleborns can't. Glad Harry got away from the Malfoys. Neville is quite interesting.
Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed Date: 2012.05.08 - 07:04PM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
Okay, the concentration camp the Grangers have been moved to is creeping me out. As a Muggle myself, I really feel the injustice there. A revolution will certainly come in the future.
I assume that these things occur because Dumbledore isn't around to block the machinations of Lucious Malfoy.
Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2012.05.08 - 06:20PM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
oh good. that was close.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.05.08 - 04:59PM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
well i would have thought harry would have made it to ginny by now but then again who knows which way he is going,.......i feel sorry for the granger as well as the rest.....also the purebloods my get a wake up call soon with harry showing up i hope.....kutgw
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2012.05.08 - 03:04PM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
Flitwick let Snape stay? Even with how horrible a teacher he is?
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2012.05.08 - 02:56PM Title: Chapter Three: Muggletown
Emma and Dan Granger? Why not use something original?
So Crabbe moved into a muggle house? LOL
