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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.05.24 - 01:09AM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

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The poor Muggleborns, that is so horrible. I wondered at first why the Grangers didn't say anything and seemed so positive about thier lives being taken over. A goblin raised Harry is an interesting idea.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.05.17 - 08:36AM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

I love the interaction with the Goblins. The Muggle-born families' situation seems hopeless. They are trapped and can't tell anyone. Harry is getting great training with the goblins. Interesting that the Slytherins are thinking and questioning.



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2012.05.14 - 07:55PM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

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Excellent story so far. I like the approach you took with Harry and Ginny's first meetings. The only thing that fits strangely is the prologue as it seems to tell us a lot about where the story is going.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.05.13 - 10:36AM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

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Another great chapter. I can see Harry is building up a useful store of knowledge.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.05.13 - 08:35AM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

Harry is learning well with deer slayer as well as having new and different experience....I hope Ginny can get Harry to talk more.....as well as work on getting him to show up to hogwarts soon.....kutgw



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.05.13 - 08:01AM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

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Another great chapter.
I'm glad Harry has found an ally in the goblins. Does he actually leave hem and get involved with wizards though?
The fact that the muggle-borns don't realize that their parents are stuck, is a bit troublesome.
Looking forward to reading more.



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2012.05.12 - 05:51PM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

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Every time I read about Hermione's parents, it just makes me so angry. . .



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2012.05.12 - 01:16PM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

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Things seem to be coming together. :-)



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.05.12 - 10:37AM Title: Chapter Four: The Goblin Camp

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An interesting chapter. I'm becoming very curios to see what is going to happen with the various plot threads in your story.




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