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Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2012.06.19 - 08:42AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Prophecy
I find your story is moving pretty fast but I like it a lot anyway. It's fairly different from most others.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.06.18 - 05:26AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Prophecy
Your story is really getting interesting now.
I'm sad that Sirius had to die. Umbridge and the Ministry have a lot to answer for. They will get theirs, eventually.
Looking forward to your next update.
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.06.17 - 09:17PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Prophecy
I'm sad Sirius had to die, but at least Ginny was prepared. Too bad they couldn't have prepared Harry also. Umbridge is still a witch. Interesting that Harry called himself Weasley-Potter. Wonder if Griphook will get in trouble for his shabby treatment of a Slayer family member. Nice to get a glimpse of the happenings inside Hogwarts. Very interesting chapter.
Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2012.06.17 - 07:44PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Prophecy
I like this story a lot, very nice read, a lot of interesting ida. And you even got Deathly Hollows in. But Sirius' death looks rather stupid. Even more so than in JKR's book... :/
Author's Response: Touche -- definitely a weakness in the plot.
Reviewer: Chrysanthemum Signed Date: 2012.06.17 - 04:33PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Prophecy
I have really enjoyed following this story!
I was a little surprised however that when we finally saw Ginny's family again there was zero mention of Ginny herself or any concern for where she might be. In her family's eyes she was a 12 year old girl who was summarily expelled from Hogwarts who then disappeared with a mass-murderer. The Weasley's should have been frantic. I found it unbelievable that no one talked about her at all.
Author's Response: A lot of things must have happened off camera.
Reviewer: Keehar Signed Date: 2012.06.17 - 01:19PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Prophecy
Another scintillating chapter. I'm loving this story. Ranks right up there with the most creative AU storys I've read. Great job. Can't wait for the next round.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.06.17 - 12:34PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Prophecy
"I is hear Unspeakable Bode tell his friends that he will definitely not be working New Years Eve," said Dobby a few days after New Years. - ?After New Years what?
Still a great Rip-Roaring yarn.
Author's Response: Oops -- must have meant "before New Years." Thanks for catching it.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.06.17 - 10:21AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Prophecy
A sad chapter. I was hoping Sirius would survive in yor story, but I guess some thing were destine to happen. I hope that the pair do a bit better with their next next task. I'll be looking forward to your next update.
