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Reviewer: Stephanie O Signed Date: 2012.07.26 - 11:28PM Title: A True Leap
I'm glad the plan worked out for Ginny, but I have to say I was more than a little shocked that she would do that to him...talk about a big leap of faith! So I assume now that Harry "offs" Voldie at a later time?
Author's Response: Yeah, Harry will go after him at another time, but that's not the point of this story. I hope you liked it at least. Thank you for taking the time to leave comments. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2012.06.09 - 04:24PM Title: A True Leap
Very well done, just a type or two to distract from a gem of a story! (For example, you have 'quiet" where you meant "quiet" in "It was quiet the leap wasn’t it?")
Author's Response: Yeah, I finished this in a rush and didn't have it checked, so I guess there are a few typos. I'll have to go through it again at some point. Thank you for the review. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2012.06.07 - 01:43AM Title: A True Leap
Fun... Quite the twist.
Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Duelist Signed Date: 2012.05.27 - 11:42AM Title: A True Leap
Wow! That was quite the denouement, though the ending seemed a bit abrupt. Nicely written, good pacing.
Author's Response: In abrupt, do you mean between chapter 2 and the last or the last part of the last chapter? Just wondering, because both are quite abrupt changes. I hope you liked it at least. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.05.21 - 09:41AM Title: A True Leap
Interesting solution.
Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews. I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy the last chapter as much as the first two. It does end rather suddenly.
Reviewer: Bethina Signed Date: 2012.05.21 - 03:02AM Title: A True Leap
Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: MyGinevra Signed Date: 2012.05.19 - 10:49AM Title: A True Leap
Brilliant concept, very well done. I don't know if anyone else has come up with the idea that Ginny could kill the Horcrux, and if not, then it's a glorious thing you have come up with. I loved it.
--Peter
Author's Response: I'm not sure either, I've not read a story with it, but if I had to guess I bet it had been done before. Thank you for the comment, I appreciate the effort!
Reviewer: Abraxan Signed Date: 2012.05.18 - 04:25PM Title: A True Leap
Wow, that was some chapter! Ginny had to kill Harry? And in front of everyone??? She's lucky nobody cursed her! A very enjoyable story, well-written and well-paced, if too short for my taste. Still, you got the job done, a story well-told. Thanks for writing it.
Abraxan
Author's Response: She was indeed, I just imagined that everyone would have been too shocked to really do anything. Sorry that the story was so short, I really was pressed for time to get it done before the deadline. Thank you for taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.05.17 - 07:24AM Title: A True Leap
I thought your idea for this story was very good. It was well written, also.
Good luck with the challenge.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: Noellexcz Signed Date: 2012.05.15 - 10:28PM Title: A True Leap
I loved the ending. You did a great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.05.15 - 02:41PM Title: A True Leap
If I had to choose, I would prefer J.K.R.`s plot, but this came a close second. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.05.15 - 09:18AM Title: A True Leap
Well done. Sad that everyone turned against her at the end, though. Nice way of condensing everything, yet still retaining the poignancy of the story, of her purpose.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really wish that I'd had more time for this plot. You know, to really develop her feelings knowing what had to be done.
Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2012.05.14 - 09:59PM Title: A True Leap
Brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.05.14 - 08:12PM Title: A True Leap
i am sorry your not going to make this longer but then again a short one is better because now we all can use the ride to make are own ideas on how it worked to this point.....kutgw
Author's Response: I'm sorry to, three chapters are not enough to do the outcome justice. Thank you for the comment!
