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Reviewer: KateP Signed Date: 2013.03.29 - 03:18PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
I agree with every other review I loved this story and you have left me wanting more if you ever consider writing Harry and Ginny's school years you will have a reader in me for sure
Author's Response: Thank you and thank you for taking the time to review. I'm glad you enjoyed this story so much and that you would like it to continue. I would like to write more in this universe eventually. It's nice to know I'll have a reader:)
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 04:51PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Very well done! I love the scenes with Ginny and Luna - I have a daughter that age and it was very well done. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad to hear that I captured how ten-year-old girls would act :). I remember what I was like at ten, so I drew heavily on that. Thanks for reviewing and the stars.
Reviewer: Henryjb99 Signed Date: 2012.12.02 - 09:09PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
I loved this story. It takes a unique approach to the bond idea and I hope you would consider expanding on the story and letting us see more of the interaction between Harry and Ginny.
Thank you for your time to provide us with this wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I really enjoyed creating this new world for Harry and Ginny and very well may expand upon it sometime in the future. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.11.25 - 04:46PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
I like how you've put so much detail into this opening chapter and look forward to seeing how the story progresses.
Author's Response: Thanks so much and for the stars.
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2012.11.21 - 10:51AM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Oh you've set this up nicely. I can picture the two girls playing with their magical chemistry set in Luna's room. You've given a basis for what we know will be coming in Diagon Alley. Your characterizations are spot on as well. I always enjoy interactions with Luna, and she's going to be effective for her perspective after the upcoming hug.
Author's Response: Thank you, it's always nice to hear that a reader thinks the characterizations are good. Glad you liked the set up as well!
Reviewer: Unrequited Signed Date: 2012.11.18 - 01:35PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
No Review
Author's Response: Thank you for the stars!
Reviewer: ababcd Signed Date: 2012.11.01 - 10:43AM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Exceedingly well written, I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for the stars!
Reviewer: Henryjb99 Signed Date: 2012.10.27 - 10:39AM Title: Prologue - The Potion
No Review
Author's Response: Thank you for the stars.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.10.23 - 05:29AM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Interesting start to your story.
I love the way Ginny and Luna are such good friends. The mischief they would get into would, probably, rival the twins.
Poor Harry! The Dursley's really are the worst sort of muggles.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks. I really wanted to have Ginny and Luna be best friends. It makes sense to me since they live so close to one another, and I think they're personalities are such, that they actually compliment one another. And yes, the Dursey's truly are the worst, most especially Petunia.
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.10.20 - 10:49AM Title: Prologue - The Potion
What an interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more. Amazing the amount of trouble two youngsters can get up to.
Author's Response: It is amazing, isn't it? I'm glad you liked the beginning and hope you'll enjoy the rest as well. Thank you for commenting.
Reviewer: SakinaWithLove Signed Date: 2012.10.19 - 08:04AM Title: Prologue - The Potion
It's a very good beginning and quite a surprising one - you have really created a nice footing for the story to unfold. I love Greek mythology so the mention of Aphrodite really attracted me. The Harry scenario was just what I imagined would be prior to Hogwarts and I loved how you showed Ginny and Luna's friendship ... I have high expectations now and I am really looking forward as to how you take this forward ....
Good Luck!
Author's Response: I love mythology as well, and could envision there being potions and spells, especially older ones that envoke the ancient gods and goddesses and the powers they possess. I hope I can continue to meet your expectations. Thank you for commenting.
Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2012.10.19 - 12:38AM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Suprb.
A wonderful start with my three favorite characters.
Looking forwaed to more (LFTM)
Ja ne
Jim
Author's Response: Thank you for the stars. They're my three fav characters as well, Glad to hear you liked it so far.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.10.18 - 04:53PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
well now thats a heck of a start....kutgw
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked the beginning.
Reviewer: Sexyduck Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 10:16PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Well done. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Kimbovet Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 07:30PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Great start! Really liked your versions of Ginny & Luna.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Luna and wanted to create a world where she and Ginny were close friends. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 04:15PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
I really like this story so far. I think you have defintely nailed Harry and his situation before Hogwarts and I can't wait to see what Happens as the result of Ginny and Luna's potion.
Author's Response: Glad you like it, and that you think I've captured the essence of Harry's home life. Time will tell regarding the results of the potion.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 02:11PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Good start.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you like the rest as well!
Reviewer: Firecaptain Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 02:11PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
Lovely start. Hope to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you. There will be an update every week until the end of the challenge.
Reviewer: drummersgirl Signed Date: 2012.10.17 - 02:10PM Title: Prologue - The Potion
No Review
Author's Response: Thank you for the stars :)
