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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.18 - 06:43PM Title: Surprises

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Author's Response: Thank you



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2012.11.22 - 08:02PM Title: Surprises

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This was clearly a transitional chapter. I was left a bit confused however. I'm beginning to wonder about the headaches they seem to be having, as well as the lack of progress in their developing an understanding of their magical bond. We still haven't seen it referenced in any conversation between the two, although we know how important it is. After all, it drew Dumbledore to the Alley. My curiosity is aroused.

Author's Response: Thank you.



Reviewer: Cole Signed Date: 2012.11.01 - 09:45PM Title: Surprises

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This is overall enjoyable, I do find that you use some odd phrasings at times. I might suggest you get a beta reader to help correct some of the grammatical errors. Again an enjoyable story, and I look forward to reading more. I typically enjoy the "Bond" stories, despite a few dreadful ones that I've read over the years, I do enjoy the slightly slower buildup of Harry and Ginny's friendship/relationship.

Autho r's Response: Thanks. What can I say? I had a crappy grammar back then.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.11.01 - 09:18PM Title: Surprises

well now what will happen in a day or two when hogwarts is in play....kutgw

Author's Response: Good question




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