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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed
Date: 2016.06.23 - 12:34AM
Title: Chapter 4
Bill as their mentor and advisor is a great choice
Reviewer: nataylaleah Signed
Date: 2013.05.03 - 05:57AM
Title: Chapter 4
No Review
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed
Date: 2012.12.31 - 08:55PM
Title: Chapter 4
I love the idea of bringing Bill in to help them.
Reviewer: hptrump Signed
Date: 2012.11.24 - 03:18AM
Title: Chapter 4
Thank you. I can read chapter 4 now.
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed
Date: 2012.11.20 - 08:54PM
Title: Chapter 4
This is a great move. Bill's appearance will both facilitate matters for the new couple and allow the story to proceed without undue conflict. I'm looking forward to the next scene with Ginny's folks. It's a touchy situation. They're legal, but they are kids.
Reviewer: mika22412 Signed
Date: 2012.11.16 - 11:24AM
Title: Chapter 4
Yes, it is fixed. Glad I was able to read this chapter before 5. I am glad they will have Bill on their side. Now on to finally finishing this wonderful story.
Author's Response: I thought it would be quite fitting to bring Bill in and having him champion them. I see him as being that type of person. And I am very glad they were able to fix things.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2012.11.15 - 07:36PM
Title: Chapter 4
i think if they where smart they would getthe twins down at a different time and talked to them about oppertunitys to move on in the ways they have made for themselves.......kutgw
Author' s Response: I agree. The twins have a great deal of potential - just not in your usual academic environment. They fit outside the box.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2012.11.15 - 05:06PM
Title: Chapter 4
It's great they have Bill on their side. They are right, by going against Dumbledore, they have vastly reduced the people they can go to and even then how do they know they can trust them?
I wonder if Fudge and Deumbledore will work against each other to Harry and Ginny's advantage! That would be well deserved for both the Minister and Head Master!
Can't wait for round 2 with Molly...lol!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my choice of mentor. Choosing not to go along with Dumbledore really changes things. I've given a little bit of thought as to how it might play out using the Fudge/Dumbledore rivalry to their advantage. It could be quite interesting - but both are powerhouses, in their own way. It would be a fine line to tread.
Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed
Date: 2012.11.15 - 03:55PM
Title: Chapter 4
Yay! An update! You've made me a very happy pregnant lady. I'm glad Bill is so calm and relaxed, and that Harry is not allowing the bigotry of the wizarding world towards Goblins to affect him.
Author's Response: Anything to keep pregnant ladies happy. Especially towards the end. Bill is a great character and I see him being extremely helpful. I see his job teaching him to be calm in the line of fire. To me, having Harry be accepting of the goblins is very much in line with how he is portrayed in JK's books. He didn't grow up with the bigotry, so he is much more open - everything magical is new and wonderful, including goblins.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed
Date: 2012.11.15 - 03:24PM
Title: Chapter 4
Bills involvement should prove interesting. I'm looking forward to how this Weasley family conference will go.
Author's Response: I think Bill's involvement will work well. He's such a neat character. As to the conference, it will be interesting.
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed
Date: 2012.11.15 - 02:14PM
Title: Chapter 4
Oh, very much looking forward for the upcoming discussion with the parents.
Author's Response: It will be an interesting discussion. But Bill is there to help out.
Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed
Date: 2012.11.15 - 10:18AM
Title: Chapter 4
This is a great sereies.
Hope to see a lot more of it.
Naybe Bill can comute through portkey to keep his job in Egypt as well
Thanks for the story.
Ja ne
Jim
PS. Your chapter four is listed as five and four is not seen on the story site. ?? No clue what the glitch was
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'm sure Bill will sort things out. There are a lot of possibilities out there for him. Apparently Ch 3 was uploaded twice, which seems to have messed up the SIYE numbering. My chapters heading correspond to the proper chapter numbers. Thanks for the heads up on that.
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