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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.12.19 - 02:15PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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Well, this answered a few questions. The big question remains why did Harry leave and what will Ginny do when she sees him.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2013.02.01 - 06:48PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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Loved the ending. What an incredible amount for him to take in and I'm as bamboozled as him...what could have made him leave his wife and child. I suspect foul play.

Author's Response: I can admit this much: you probably suspect right. Even in an A/U piece, I just can't write Harry as being purposefully cruel to the people he loves



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2013.01.23 - 11:22AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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This was quite the suspense-filled chapter. Poor Harry, having to learn all over again the story of his teen years and then to discover that he's married with a kid. You've done a good job with him brooding alone in Dean's room (I'm glad it was a friendly face in the Leaky Cauldron who approached him first), following closely in JKR's words with just the right amount of guilt flavored with wonder. I love Harry's comment in the last line; it makes me want to read the next chapter.

Well done.

Author's Response: Re-writing Harry's story so that Harry hears it and so that the reader isn't bored was more of a challenge than I originally expected. Why thank you :) Hearing I got that balance right is really nice to hear! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.01.02 - 10:24PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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Great chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! An update will be be added shortly :)



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2013.01.02 - 09:45AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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interesting... I KNOW I clicked Add To Favorites on this story, but for some reason I didn't get a notification!!!

Nice new chapter, about time Harry met someone he knows :)

ILG

PS not sure if I told you, but I don't normally give reviews, just ratings.

Author's Response: Aww, I'm honoured! Thank you VERY much! I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story so far.



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2013.01.01 - 04:35PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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The start of the story was intriguing and next chapters just adds to the mystery. From the first sight doesn't look like some evil plot, just some coincidence which took Harry away from home. But there should be something else I guess ). Good that Harry met Dean (I suppose he's not an evil guy here) and not someone wishing him harm. Wonder what he's going to do now: he has wife and he has girlfriend...

Keep going, so far you doing great!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Glad to hear that I've caught your interest and that you're enjoying the story so far. I'm having a lot of fun writing it!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2013.01.01 - 02:07PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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We must ne getting close to a real explanation.

Author's Response: One puzzle piece at a time. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)



Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 11:37PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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Married AND a father. Didn't see that one coming.

Good thing he ran into someone trustworthy. It could have been someone like Theodore Nott. Or worse, Romilda Vane.

Author's Response: Glad I'm keeping the readers guessing. Thanks for reading and for reviewing!



Reviewer: nesciamema Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 06:03PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

Epic, can't wait for the "here's Ginny" part.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Well, that will be here shortly!



Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 03:20PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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Great ending sentence! **grin** The story is developing nicely....I think you don't need too much more of Harry agonizing over Sam....we all know that Harry is a good guy and will feel badly over any perceived ill-treatment of anyone.

Eagerly looking forward to Harry's meeting Ginny.....and Ron....and the twins....and ????

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Glad you're enjoying the story so far.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 01:49PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

Yea Harry your in deep trouble with a little red head and she is in need of see you now....as for dean being the one to tell Harry that's a tough one on him, but at lease he is man enought to do the right thing....as for how to move forward, only time will tell him how to go.....kutgw

Author's Response: I love a good family complication. Thanks for reading and for the review :)



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 12:29PM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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Very interesting. I like this Dean, most writers want him to be the bad guy in after stories. This one gave up his wand and is actually helping Harry. That sounds like the guy who's life was saved by Harry. Can't wait to read more.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I don't even know how I landed on using Dean to be the one to help Harry out, but I'm really glad I did. I agree-- poor Dean usually gets a bad rep. Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing!



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 11:39AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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Sort of what I was expecting from the reactions to Harry last chapter but its great to finally know at least part of what happened. Now I'm curios how Ginny and the rest of the Weasleys will react and what exactly happened to Harry to cause him to loose his memory? I'll be looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: You can probably guess I haven't made it easy on poor Harry. Thanks for reading and for reviewing!



Reviewer: Manwe Valarian Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 11:08AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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I was wondering about Harry's family. If I am remembering the timelines correctly, Ginny was in early pregnancy when Harry disappeared. Should be interesting, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! :)



Reviewer: seeker_seven Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 10:09AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting Harry Potter

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love it..cant wait for your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!!




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