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Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed
Date: 2014.05.06 - 10:36PM
Title: Ch 28 Some progress
Boy makes a big difference if you are giving Narcissa honors huh? oops
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding. I have been very busy.
I have seen Narcissa portrayed several different ways in the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction. I have a wider reason for the growing friendship between Molly and Narcissa. The last two books of my "before Albus goes to Hogwarts" series will have more about Narcissa than the next book, Broomsticks and Bad Guys.
Thank you so much for your reviews! I promise to answer every one.
Jet
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2013.07.20 - 11:06PM
Title: Ch 28 Some progress
The magical maps sound interesting. Love the knowledge about the elves.
Glad to hear a little about Teddy.
Author's Response: I always loved the magic of the map, and thought that it had possibilities. Harry and the Aurors will make good use of the map.
I always thought there was a lot more to house elves, Goblins and their relationship to the Magi (magical people) than was in the books. Lots more coming.
Can’t forget about Teddy! He is as important as any of the “real” cousins. I am not the only person writing who has Harry and Ginny very involved in raising him.
Thank you for your regular reviews!
Jet LaBarge
Reviewer: zequist Signed
Date: 2013.07.18 - 10:18PM
Title: Ch 28 Some progress
You named a computer-loving goblin Eniac? That is absolutely hilarious!
Oh, and speaking of names, it is Hannah, with an 'h' at both ends. She's one of my very favorite characters, and as much as I'm otherwise enjoying this story and as much as I really love seeing her have a meaningful role to play, that missing second h just bothers me every time I see it.
Author's Response: Thank you for catching my mistake on Hannah. Word has a ‘find and replace’ function. It’s not quite as easy for me, since I post on 3 sites, but I will try to correct Hannah on all the chapters on all sites. Please, anytime you find a mistake or have a problem with something I wrote let me know. Interaction with readers has made this a much better story.
Neville and Hanna and their children do play a minor but continuing role in the story. I have the large, multigenerational home of the Longbottoms across a Muggle road from the large piece of property that the Burrow is on. The Longbottom children are sort of raised with the large Weasley/Potter clan.
Coming up with names for Goblins and house elves can be a problem. I’m glad you liked Eniac and get the joke.
Jet LaBarge
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2013.07.18 - 02:03PM
Title: Ch 28 Some progress
I like the idea of a goblin who drools over CNC machines.
Author's Response: Maybe it’s because I have been involved with manufacturing things my whole life, but it frustrates me that so few people see how much help a little magic could be in making things. To be able to cut a board longer as well as shorter. To re-size a box, even if you needed enough cardboard but you could change the shape. All the manufacturing processes that almost work.
It’s fun to think that there is a little magic in some of our more amazing day to day objects.
I like the idea of Goblins, the world’s best metalworkers in the pre-computer days, being up-to-date and adding a little magic to how things are made.
Jet
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