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Reviewer: millie Signed Date: 2021.06.23 - 04:15AM Title: Chapter 25 - Summer's End

To be honest, I thought you were planning to kill Queen Elizabeth. Nice way you incorporated real history into this, since Princess Diana *was* killed in a car accident.

Author's Response: It was the point to incorporate some real History. I did careful research to try to make all the details fit together as accurately as possible. That you so much for reading and taking the time to review. I hope you are enjoying the story. Happy reading!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.01.13 - 03:39AM Title: Chapter 25 - Summer's End

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The additional students from Beauxbatons will certainly make the upcoming term an interesting one. Harry's idea to leave the Black heritage to Tonks was as surprising as well as amazing. I hope that Lupin can enjoy their heritage for a long time.
The dispute between Hermione and Harry came as a surprise. I still ponder about the purpose of the dispute in regard of the story. Is it a sideshow only or will it become important later. We will see...
Anyway, the biggest surprise was the way you included Diana's death into the story.

So far it was a great fun to read this story. In particular I liked the loving attention to the many details you describe. Every now and then it would have been nicer to read the conversation, as only the summary of a conversation. But thats only a minor thing that I've noticed.
And now I look forward to the next update...

Author's Response: I am glad you approve of returning the Black heritage to Tonks, I imagine Lupin will find a way to adjust, he has been poor for so long.
The thing between Hermione and Harry may well be only a minor bump in the road, but part of this story is as much about growing up and maturing, as it is about defeating Voldemort, so these minor bumps are in my mind important.
Diana's death was more than anything a convenient bit of timing, and a place to tie the real and fictional worlds together, if for but a moment.
I am so very glad you are enjoying this story and I hope you will continue to do so for as long as it takes to finish it.
Thanks so much for the read and the review.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.12.12 - 04:47PM Title: Chapter 25 - Summer's End

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A very enjoyable chapter.
Just like Hermione to jump to conclusions before finding out the explanation. I think she has some major grovelling to do, to correct her mistake.
I like the twist at the end.
Looking forward to seeing the next instalment.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. Ron had his time of disbelief in the fourth book. I thought Hermione needed to experience hers. Of course they couldn't be the same. We will see what she has to do to fix it. As for the ending of the chapter... well, I always felt the timing was just to huge to ignore. Thanks! Happy reading!



Reviewer: mysuv1 Signed Date: 2015.12.05 - 08:16PM Title: Chapter 25 - Summer's End

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This story is getting better and better I cant wait to read more of this. It has become one of my favorite fan fiction stories

Author's Response: Very glad to hear it. Thank you for reading and commenting!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.12.05 - 06:15PM Title: Chapter 25 - Summer's End

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Interesting twist.

Author's Response: Which one? Thanks for taking the time to comment.




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