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Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2023.01.18 - 07:59PM Title: Chapter 27 - Defense Against the Dark… Lord?

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I have really enjoyed reading this story, but you've an interesting error:

“let us begin with some historical context of the late seventieth century..."

We're only in the 21st century now, the 70th won't be for quite a while, no?

Author's Response: Very interesting, You are indeed correct! I thought I had corrected that already. I will look at it again. Thank you so much for reading!



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2021.07.06 - 12:11AM Title: Chapter 27 - Defense Against the Dark… Lord?

I love what you've done with the HP universe!

But there's a sentence you might want to fix:

Therefore, it is not surprising to me that Wizarding culture presents itself through what I would call a Ninetieth Century sensibility.

Niteteenth Century, perhaps?

Author's Response: Indeed. That's spell check for you. Consider it fixed. Thank you. ANd thank you very much for reading. I do hope you will stay with the story.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2021.06.21 - 09:26PM Title: Chapter 27 - Defense Against the Dark… Lord?

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Great story. Just update before I pass away.

Author's Response: I will do what I can. It does neither of us any good If I try to make promises. Another chapter is on its way to my Beta's as I send this.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.06.20 - 09:44PM Title: Chapter 27 - Defense Against the Dark… Lord?

Great to see you back in the saddle, Jeo! Had to reread this from the first chapter and the quality hasn't dipped one iota! Looking forward to seeing what you do with this! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.06.20 - 09:43PM Title: Chapter 27 - Defense Against the Dark… Lord?

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Great to see you back in the saddle, Jeo! Had to reread this from the first chapter and the quality hasn't dipped one iota! Looking forward to seeing what you do with this! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouraging words. No matter what happens in my life to draw me away, this story always seems to draw me back. I fully intend to finish it. Thanks again, and happy reading!




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