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Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2022.09.02 - 05:43PM Title: Chapter 30 - Potter's Keep

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Great to see this update. Hope you keep it going.

Author's Response: As you know, it is always my intent to continue. Life just seems to have a way of interferring, Thank you so much for reading!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.08.29 - 07:41AM Title: Chapter 30 - Potter's Keep

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Well now the hits just keep on coming….nothing like finding more hidden rooms and objects that bargaining for…. Kutgw

Author's Response: Indeed. One of my goals from the time I started writting this Fanfic was always to expand upon the HP Canon Universe. I have tried to take what was in the books, or simply implied in the books and expand on it. Thus there is an awful lot in this story that simply wouldn't be if it were a commercial endeavor. But I love detail and there was always so much more I wanted to know as I read the books... Here I get to add to my hearts content and show how I think things should work, or must have works. Thanks for reading!!!



Reviewer: demonesprit Signed Date: 2021.08.26 - 01:28PM Title: Chapter 30 - Potter's Keep

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I'm really enjoying this. I think I might have read part of it back a ways, but it's been fun getting reacquainted, and I think you might have updated while I was reading the earlier chapters. Your take on Slytherin's Chamber was fresh and interesting. But I think Harty might need to get back to memory watching ... :)

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words, and I am glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you so much for reading!!!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.08.25 - 05:40PM Title: Chapter 30 - Potter's Keep

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That was quite the adventure and a heap on interesting discoveries! Liked the bit between Minnie and Little Albus! Harry and Ginny have obviously discovered their bond but not it's extent! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Glad you seem to be enjoying my little tale. It was finally time to establish that Harry is more aware than he sometimes comes off. He is not blind to their connection and if he is acting with nobel intention it is for his own sake as much as Ginny's and everyone around them. Thank for reading!!



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2021.08.25 - 02:18PM Title: Chapter 30 - Potter's Keep

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I'm still hooked by your tale!

But I must ask about two words used in the story, "wretch" and "mote." I believe you meant "retch" and "moat"?

Author's Response: Yeah, that's what I get for not waiting on my betas. I should have caught those myself, but when you are writimg you often get in this place (well, I do) where it is all about content and you loose sight of the grammer and the spelling. Consider it fixed. Thank you!! Glad you are enjoying the story.




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