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Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2013.03.11 - 06:03PM Title: Chapter 2 - At the Manor

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The extended Weasley clan can be a well-oiled machine when it needs to be. This was a very interesting version of Ron. He seems like a better friend now. It's interesting how seriously they take Legilimency now. Snape must be spinning in his grave.

Author's Response: Exactly! The Weasley's are a family, and a tight one at that, so in a crisis... they all show up and circle the wagons. I am glad you think Ron is interesting. I really wanted to show a well turned out Ron, strong and confident and compassionate. This is a man who has been married to Hermione for a decade and has two children of his own and a successful career. He is a grown up and I wanted to give a strong sense of that. And... lastly - Legilimency should be taken seriously, the invasion of another's mind is a very serious thing! Thank you so much for your comments!



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.03.09 - 11:19PM Title: Chapter 2 - At the Manor

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I can't believe Harry would let someone separate him from Ginny at such a time and I don't understand why anyone would want to. If Harry was trying to keep everything normal why did he suddenly invite them all over - that is not the time to have your house invaded by a small army. Poor Ginny - how horrible to be all alone at such a time or worse stuck with your mother instead of your husband.

Author's Response: Call it outmoded Wizard traditionalism. It's the Midwives that feel the father has no place at a birthing, and that is taken from historical traditionalism. Yes it is a small army, but it is all Weasley's.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2013.03.09 - 01:49PM Title: Chapter 2 - At the Manor

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Ah, it was Harry weeping that confused me last chapter. I thought Ginny might have insisted that Harry stay. I can't imagine how awful it must be to be out the loop when it's your wife and children involved.

Author's Response: Yup... the one thing that Harry truly finds frightening after his eventful life...




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