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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.06 - 01:42PM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack Interesting twist having Tom and Voldemort both attacking the village of Hogsmead. I am curious to read the next chapter. Reviewer: CharLee Signed Date: 2015.08.02 - 08:46AM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack No Review Reviewer: demented patronus Signed Date: 2013.12.10 - 11:07AM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack I like the chapter I like the thing with tom and voldemort . ready to read more Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.08.21 - 05:29AM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack Very creepy beginning. I've never really seen Ginny as the evil queen sort. I'm very curious about Tom - is he an illusion or how is he there? Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2013.08.12 - 10:13AM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack Very intense. You move right into the action, and you pace it well; that can be difficult sometimes. I enjoyed Ginny's introspection during the fight, as well as her interaction with the others. I'm at my wits' end about where this will go next. I'm enjoying it. Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.08.11 - 09:37PM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2013.08.08 - 11:21AM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack That certainly started with a bang. Ginny's a good dueler, but is she so good? What next? Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2013.08.08 - 09:51AM Title: Chapter 1: The Hogsmeade Attack This chapter has an air of unreality for me but perhaps that was your intention. The action is abrupt and has some very strange moments. Ginny arguing about Voldemort's strategy during battle? Voldemort splits into two? Is that supposed to be a hallucination generated by the Dementors? Ginny being offered a role as queen? As an equal? Even Voldemort isn't crazy enough to circumvent his own goals that much. Ginny surrenders? Voldemort doesn't just kill her but gives her her last request? | |||||||
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