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Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2014.01.16 - 02:08PM Title: Chapter 13: Shadows

I'm sure you've already had millions of people comment on the wrong incantation--it should be "Expecto Patronum", not "Expecto Patronus".

I'm confused about this line: I closed my eyes as he taunted Harry, as he presented Tom.
As WHO presented Tom?


Anyway, too many characters to keep track of. Might be better to pare down some of the extraneous details.

Author's Response: About the incantation, that was me being dumb. And the 'he' is Voldemort.



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.01.13 - 02:30PM Title: Chapter 13: Shadows

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Whew.how much more will Ginny have to go through to get Harry back? Not that I'm complaining - its a really good imaginative story.




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