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Reviewer: MyGinevra Signed Date: 2014.05.15 - 01:28PM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
I loved this opening to what promises to be a tender story and a nice little adventure. The chapter moves gently yet purposefully. The moments where Harry reminiscences about his parents' wedding day made me smile.
Author's Response: Glad that you liked it. The weight Harry must feel from the loss of all them seemed nearly unbearable to me.
MNF
Reviewer: Hippothestrowl Signed Date: 2014.05.14 - 01:53PM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
Ah, thanks, MNF! I think first time my tired eyes might have skimmed over the block of text at the top as relating to the song (kind of Author's aside) and I dived into the story. Second and third reads I admit I was reading paragraphs looking to see if I'd missed something! Sorry.
I'll see if this will let me raise my rating to 8..
Author's Response: Glad I could help. MNF
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.05.09 - 01:11PM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
Good start to your story.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks, it's a sweet story to write. I was honestly missing my Marauders so much. The next chapter is in the queue. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.05.09 - 07:37AM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
Harry do something reckless or impulsive? Surely not! It's great to see a new story from you and I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens on Harry's happy day. :-)
Author's Response: Harry is always the utmost of maturity, isn't he? I will warn you, this three chapter bit is all fluff and love, not much drama (although there is angst, because, well, it's me). Glad to be back, I've missed writing my Marauders so much as of late.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF
Reviewer: griffinhawk Signed Date: 2014.05.08 - 10:18AM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
Great start! I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks. Next chapter is in the queue.
MNF
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.05.06 - 10:48AM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
I was surprised but very pleased to see this beginning. I look forward to seeing where you go with this. There are certainly some twists and revelations that could be complicated. Tonks/Remus/Eva seems complicated. Thanks for posting this.
Author's Response: The Tonks/Eva/Remus thing really won't happen in this story, unless I plan on taking it past the third chapter, which I don't have any intention of doing right now. This is mostly just fluffy love and a bit of angst. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope you like the rest.
MNF
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.05.06 - 06:02AM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
Harry Harry Harry not good to mess with time...and go all the way back to a time when they were all happy is not a good thing....no time is a sticky thing....kutgw
Author's Response: You'll have to read on to see what happens...hope you enjoy.
MNF
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.05.06 - 01:24AM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
Good start and i can see Harry picking the date like that to visit. Has he told anybody about it?
Author's Response: Ah, those questions and more will be answered in the next chapter, which I've put in the queue. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF
Reviewer: Lokken Signed Date: 2014.05.06 - 01:02AM Title: Chapter 1: Ob-La-De, Ob-La-Da
An interesting start. I will look forward to following chapter(s) to see how it turns out.
Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue, so I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF
