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Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2017.09.18 - 10:07PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.03.28 - 06:09PM Title: Chapter 14

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Lol! I must have a sixth sense!dud I not mention Draco in my last review! 😂

Loved the ending...made me grin. Exquisite torture I think!

Author's Response: It really, really is for sure :)



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.10.07 - 06:20PM Title: Chapter 14

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What a great ending after such a serious chapter.
Draco would have been replaying almost every scene of the last year or so in his head whilst sitting in Azkaban. What else would he have to do?
With all that time on his hands, certain scenes would have to seem strange.
I'm glad he has told Harry about the witch talking to Bellatrix.

Love this story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: It's what I'd be doing in prison, especially since the prisoners wouldn't be allowed to mingle. With no one to talk to, you'd just sit and think constantly.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2014.10.07 - 12:02PM Title: Chapter 14

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I assume that at some point, Draco will be release from Azkaban to marry Astoria Greengrass and have Scorpios. The conversation between him and Harry was so intense. Phew!

Love the lighthearted and hopeful trun of events toward the end. About time Ginny and Harry have a beak even if it means a bigger tummy and fuller breasts. There is new life and with that springs hope.

I also read your author's notes. Do not worry too much about British and English quirks .. Writing from your heart is the best way to engage the reader whether he or she is an Indian, a Chinese, a Canadian, an American or a Brit. Otherwise you will get too bogged down with unnecessary details. I enjoy your stories and I have been reading your stories for years. I know you, You are a prolific writer and I actually like the way you tell a story. Easy to read and more importantly, you complete your stories and update frequently. Your characterisation, description, and plotlines are just fine.

Your little boy must be really big now. He woke up one day looking like a baby Harry Potter with his hair all sticking up. I remember that from years back. So, well done, you.

Author's Response: Yes, this will follow canon so that's Draco's plan and I'm following it, with my own special twists and turns. I really enjoyed writing this chapter and in the sequel there will be more between them for sure. I do want to get the details right, but at the point that I wrote this I was just not up for it. I actually have 3 sons (living, I lost 3 as well). Ages 10, 6 and 1.5 :)



Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2014.10.07 - 11:21AM Title: Chapter 14

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Can I just say how delightful I find this story? Really, really delightful, and I'm enjoying your updates immensely. I'm not good at criticism, even the constructive kind, and have nothing but accolades to add. I look forward to reading more soon.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it so much! It's good to hear that along with the critiques too.



Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2014.10.07 - 01:47AM Title: Chapter 14

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First off, great chapter. One can see the improvements, and the characters are believable - and cute, in Ginny's case. ^.^

And there is no need to apologise. Even the big commercial authors have lots of proof readers. Personally, I use my first writing as a rough draft and expand and correct from there; sure, it lengthens the time until release, but I am far less prolific than you are, so the method might be your cup of tea.

As for being cruel, it is a writer's prerogative. And serious stories need serious drama. And hearing about your husband crying would suggest that you are really good at that.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei

Author's Response: Thanks, and yes I do need a lot of proofing. Sometimes I recruit my mom but she's busy being retired right now :) I'm still not sure how that works. It is my prerogative but at the same time I still feel a bit apprehensive about it.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 07:24PM Title: Chapter 14

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Interesting how Malfoy reasoned it out - he does know Harry well. I can see him not wanting to be in debt to Harry. Great chapter - cute ending :)

Author's Response: I couldn't see Draco being able to stomach owing Harry anything at all.



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 06:24PM Title: Chapter 14

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Ginny is very cute. So Draco recognized the voice of the woman talking to Bella. That strengthens my guess that it is Goyle's mother.

Author's Response: It's a good guess :)



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 04:28PM Title: Chapter 14

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Hope they enjoy the shower - they deserve a bit of fun. I couldn't quite work out if Draco gave Harry any useful information or not, but it was quite nice to see him on the right side of the fence. Time to think in prison seems to be doing him good. (I can't see that you need to worry much about writing as an American. I've not noticed anything really irritating about your delivery or scenes, and I think as long as you avoid the double evil of pancakes and scones for breakfast most people are happy enough to go with the flow!)

Author's Response: They do deserve some fun. Draco's info will probably be helpful, at least in hindsight. Maybe not in the way you might think. I'm glad the American thing isn't bugging you too much, but you have to explain the pancake thing to me. That's new (not using it btw, just curious!) :)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 11:14AM Title: Chapter 14

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I love this chapter, it's possibly one of my favourite so far. I get that it's a difficult story for you and it certainly has a punch as a reader too. But I really love how you've portrayed Draco in here and how you've got that perfect mix of emotions right the way through, with that bit of humour - from Draco's last line to Harry's response in the shower.
Keep up the great work! :)

Author's Response: It's one of my favorites too. I rewrote it at least twice, maybe three times. I did enjoy the interaction between them, giving Draco more depth than is typical.



Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 11:11AM Title: Chapter 14

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Great chapter as always. Wish Draco could told him more. Looking forward to next one.

Author's Response: It would be too easy if he'd had more answers, but he did have a lot of useful information :D



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 06:04AM Title: Chapter 14

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Shame that Draco did not stick around to find out who that woman was. Whoever she was, for Bella to talk to her she would be either relation or some sort or relative of some DE.

Author's Response: Yeah, that would have made the whole thing a heck of a lot easier, although to be honest- Aunt or not, if Bellatrix slammed a door in my face I'd probably run away too :D



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 05:58AM Title: Chapter 14

Poor Harry. Stuck between a rock and hard place....glad to see Ginny making head way..a.nd Draco and Harry are all squared again....kutgw

Author's Response: It's such an awful place to be stuck. I am setting Harry and Draco up for the sequel *insert evil cackle here*



Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 05:12AM Title: Chapter 14

Nice to see a new chapter; keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it :)



Reviewer: Asap2004 Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 04:47AM Title: Chapter 14

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I wait for your updates every week because I love how you describe the emotion in this story and have woven an intriguing plot into a project that I understand was designed to be therapeutic. Because of your authors notes, I'm very aware while I'm reading that the emotions Harry is feeling are more than likely true to life rather than imagined and it makes the whole saga very realistic, despite the fact that the situation is so bizarre. The fear mingled with the little bits of hope... You capture it all extremely well.

Author's Response: They are as true to mine and my husband's experiences as I can capture them, at least in this bizarre situation. I'm glad you're enjoying it. It is a huge gamble of fear and hope. I spent my entire last pregnancy terrified constantly to the point where I probably ended up with PTSD and he lived, but I didn't believe he was going to live until he was about 13 months old.



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 01:00AM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: hptrump Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 12:19AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved how you ended on a funny note.

Author's Response: Thanks, I think it needed a lift up after most of that chapter :)




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