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Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2014.09.15 - 09:26AM Title: CH. 3 “A Cold Dish of Revenge”

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A very descriptive chapter. The times and dates in the last 3 chapters were a bit confusing becasue they seem to be mentioned in different context or plot. Again the focus is better than chapter 1.

Author's Response: Dates are a bit confusing. Chapters 2 and 3 are not strictly in chronological order. They are more in subject matter order. I think it makes for an easier read, but not strictly following chronological order can be confusing. I knew I had a bit of a problem, but didn't know how to fix it without a lot of rewriting. Jet




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