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Reviews For Birth of the Potter Children

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2014.11.05 - 04:37PM Title: CH. 8 Arthur Airplane Ride

half-star

LOL. My head is spinning. Too many characters.

Author's Response: There are probably too many characters. Then again the story is probably too long. I hate to think how many words I will force my readers to read by the time I am done with Albus's story. Thank you for reading! FYI (For Your Information), Molly will get her ride in an airplane. I don't have her reaction written yet, but I doubt if she will be eager to travel the Muggle way. Jet

Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.10.15 - 09:52PM Title: CH. 8 Arthur Airplane Ride

Interesting chapter.
I, sort of have the same thinking as Ginny at the end. Betty does sound a bit empty- headed or a stereotyped, old thinking witch.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I am doing my best to portray strong female characters. Betty is the exception. I think we all know "Betty's". Jet

Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.10.15 - 09:10PM Title: CH. 8 Arthur Airplane Ride

I did not read this story when you started it a while ago but am glad I waited to see how it's going....I have ego say what a fun ride you have...there is only one problem...you still need a prof reader on your chapters due to some spelling and grammar errors....kutgw

Author's Response: I do have a proof reader, FriendofMolly. Between us we catch a lot. If you want to help let me know. I have had more than one Beta in the past. Thank you for the review. Jet

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