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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.19 - 11:56PM Title: Promises Broken

When I re-read the chapter I recognised why I got the feeling that Jennifer woman has nothing more in common with Ginny. You describe very well how the Ginny inside Jennifer dies step by step.
At the beginning, when the Ginny inside her is still strong, Jennifer is eager to look for Ginny’s relatives. But, of course, she already has enough excuses to do so. At the end, when there is nothing left of Ginny's spirit, Jennifer even refuses to look at the information that Samar has collected. She even lies to Ted about the information from Ginny’s former life. She nearly treats Ginny’s relatives as enemies when she sets Mrs. Hudson as a spy on them.
This is so sad and frustrating for me, since Ginny is always my favourite character.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.07.18 - 10:42PM Title: Promises Broken

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It was great to read the background to Jennifer's story. It souds like she has made a great life for herself, both with Samar and afterwards.

I think that she wouldn't make the statement about never, EVER going back to England. I just think that the thought that she had a family out there would eat away at her and she would have to go in search of them.

Do you have a be Beta? There are a few small mistakes all through this story that a beta would have found for you. The mistakes do distract from the story.
But, in saying that, it is a good story and I look forward the reading more, soon.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.07.18 - 11:29AM Title: Promises Broken

Love getting the background of Ginny and the kids and soon we will see them with Harry again and she will be making great head way in remembering who she really is....kutgw



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.18 - 05:07AM Title: Promises Broken

And lo and behold, just as I thought. Jennifer had never the slightest interest to come back to England. Even with all the information about her former life she didn't remember. Or she even had not the slightest interest to look at that information. That was not so clear to me. Jennifer behaves very strangely. It's as if she manic, without knowing it, wants to stay away from Harry as far as possible. In my eyes this Jennifer has actually nothing more in common with Ginny. Maybe her appearance, I don't know if she has changed her appearance. Ginny would care how her family is doing as soon as she knew that everybody is alive. She wouldn't send somebody to monitor and spy on her family over years.
I would prefer if she does not travel to England. It's a lose-lose situation, even if Jennifer against all expectations will somehow get her memories back. Jennifer does not want to return permanently to England. In addition, she has too many commitments to pull away easily. On the other hand I cannot imagine that Harry quits his job, leaves all his friends, moves over to Jennifer's place to live with a shadow of Ginny, to sleep in Samar bed and go on living in Samar’s shoes. As I said before, it’s a sad situation.



Reviewer: maisa potter Signed Date: 2015.07.18 - 01:01AM Title: Promises Broken

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Considering the length of this chapter I was expecting Jen's arrival to England!! Even though I liked this chapter and getting some background on what happened to Hen duuher time in the States, YOU ARE KILLING ME!!! Please keep up the good work and update soon!!



Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2015.07.18 - 12:54AM Title: Promises Broken

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You're killing me! Was really hoping this would be the chapter where they meet. Thanks for the update so soon, though. Hope the next one come through soon too. No Pressure!! LOL



Reviewer: nesciamema Signed Date: 2015.07.17 - 05:37PM Title: Promises Broken

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Can we get to London now???




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