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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.12.29 - 09:41AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One

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Isn't Harry's grandmother a Muggle? Why is she acting like its the 1850s? I imagine Harry would have a great time zipping along on a little tractor and tending fields without the whole horse and plow. Planting corn in July doesn't make any sense, its too late in the season. Its a cool idea, having Harry's grandmother have a small farm, but she couldn't really rely on Harry who's away 10 months out of the year and use a horse and plow.
Glad to see Peter on trial, hopefully he'll stay in jail.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.08.14 - 08:43PM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One

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The trial is interesting. I am eager to read what will happen next.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.07 - 03:23AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One

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Oh, oh, poor Harry has to work harder than before when he lived in Private Drive. Fortunately, now Ginny is always around and there is always enough to eat. I hope that Ginny does not neglect Harry, now that she has a horse.



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2015.06.18 - 06:52AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One

Not sure if you're aware, but Sirius' middle name is actually Orion



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.04.14 - 06:21PM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One

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The trial seems to be going ok. But I doubt that is going to last.
Loved how Ginny has some blackmail material on Harry now, because of his baby stories.
Looking forward to the next chapter.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.04.13 - 08:02AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One

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If you're going to write stories about British people, please have them eat at British establishments. Your Americanisms are glaring here. It's a simple three or four steps to look up the name of an American restaurant on the internet to make sure there are franchises of said restaurant in great Britain: not every American restaurant is as world-wide as McDonald's.

Having said my piece, I had to smile at Ginny's reaction to a shirtless Harry and find it sweet that she's so comfortable with him that she'll use his lap as a pillow. My thoughts on the trial are that Pettigrew is going to get off Scott-free and Sirius will be put back in Azkaban, much to my displeasure…slimy lawyers!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.04.13 - 06:01AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One

Remus almost lost the job and the curse would have continued but it's not over yet....kutgw




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