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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.12.02 - 07:37AM Title: It begins with a song

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This is definitely a creative story, based on one of my favorite Charlie Daniels songs. I think my favorite part of your story is the fact that Harry and Ginny have to put up with something every parent must contend with: their children's' loud music! The punch line at the end just made me giggle. Well done. I hope to see another of your stories in future Challenges.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 07:20AM Title: It begins with a song

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Interesting story. Good luck with the challenge.



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.11.16 - 04:06PM Title: It begins with a song

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Realistic - if that's the right word - dream! Made me laugh, especially the thought of Voldemort getting outmanoeuvred on the pitch.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 07:03PM Title: It begins with a song

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Odd.



Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 05:03PM Title: It begins with a song

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Very well done, liked the play on the song!



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 01:07PM Title: It begins with a song

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This was completely ridiculous and made me laugh! I'm a bit disappointed to hear that Harry hates country music, but great job. Voldemort make a great devil - I think Harry should have won a broom of gold, but hey a Snitch of gold is pretty good too. I loved the description of Dumbledore's outfit. Good Luck in the Challenge!



Reviewer: LadyPhoenixFireRose Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 12:48PM Title: It begins with a song

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Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 12:34PM Title: It begins with a song

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Interesting premise and I very much liked the last two lines.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 06:16AM Title: It begins with a song

Thank you for not keeping the song going but you did a very masterful job on this challenge...kutgw




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