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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2015.06.25 - 05:46AM
Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter.
The cliffee at the end has everyone waiting to see who is to blame for putting the imperious on Caroline.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: That who is going to be a big if
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed
Date: 2015.06.24 - 11:40PM
Title: Chapter 12
Wow - wasn't expecting that ending. Can't wait to hear what happened to her. I really liked this chapter - Teddy and Victoire are very sweet together. Teddy makes a great big brother, getting the others to trust him and talk to him. Great chatper!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I need to get through this weekend, then I'm going to hit the next chapter
Reviewer: ParadoxHoax Signed
Date: 2015.06.24 - 04:43PM
Title: Chapter 12
No Review
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed
Date: 2015.06.24 - 01:04PM
Title: Chapter 12
Oh dear, who imperiused Carolyn? Next chapter quickly please.
Author's Response: I will get to it soon :)
Author's Response: I will get to it soon :)
Reviewer: shanina97 Signed
Date: 2015.06.23 - 09:41PM
Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter! Also, I just read the preview for your first original novel and it was great! So I bought it of course and I'm excited to start reading:)
Have a good day & kutgw!
Author's Response: Awesome, thank you so much! I really hope you like it and definitely let me know what you think :D
Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed
Date: 2015.06.23 - 12:35PM
Title: Chapter 12
No Review
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2015.06.23 - 09:51AM
Title: Chapter 12
Now I am thinking all sorts of things.
Author's Response: Quite.
Reviewer: Lokken Signed
Date: 2015.06.22 - 05:43PM
Title: Chapter 12
Damn you, Mr Cliffhanger!!!
Author's Response: I promised another reviewer that I wouldn't have one for the next chapter.
Reviewer: potternut190 Signed
Date: 2015.06.22 - 04:20PM
Title: Chapter 12
Whoa!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: potternut190 Signed
Date: 2015.06.22 - 04:20PM
Title: Chapter 12
Whoa!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2015.06.22 - 02:07PM
Title: Chapter 12
oh dear, caroline has had a lot of issues and now they may be due to harry's case.....wow....kutgw
Author's Response: Yeah, the trick will be figuring out how she's related...
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2015.06.22 - 01:24PM
Title: Chapter 12
oh no oh no oh no not another child in pain. first nat, now caroline and let us not forget hpe, either. oh dear me.. what a cliffhanger.... now i have to wiat for the update! love Polly
excellent characterisation and discription of scenes and scenery; excellent storytelling.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :) I'm going to stop picking on the kids for awhile after this, promise.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed
Date: 2015.06.22 - 11:58AM
Title: Chapter 12
A surprising chapter! Here I was thinking that Caroline was just a straight forward abuse side story, but now it seems to be something more. I'm suspecting now its even tied into the main plot? Aside from that, the scenes with Teddy and James, and with Teddy and Victoire were both really enjoyable. Can't wait for your next update to find out more.
Author's Response: While I have red herrings once in awhile, the new characters will typically be pivotal to the story as a whole. It'd just a matter of figuring out how :) Thanks!
Author's Response: While I have red herrings once in awhile, the new characters will typically be pivotal to the story as a whole. It'd just a matter of figuring out how :) Thanks!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2015.06.22 - 11:19AM
Title: Chapter 12
I love the ending to this chapter. It's so unexpected and leaves a lot of questions that I hope will be answered in the next chapter or two.
Teddy is really good with James, so patient and understanding. I hope James can open up to him more in the future because I think the two have a special bond. Also, he's so sweet to Lily, such a great big brother. I'm not sure I know any young man who would willingly go on a picnic with a twelve-year-old girl and enjoy himself like Teddy seems to. I think Lily appreciated the one-on-one time he's given her and will heed whatever the advice and counsel he's given her. Finally, I found it funny that Teddy was so exhausted after minding four young teenagers while Harry and Ginny were away. I think the experience will make him and Victoire appreciate wanting to wait a few years before getting married and having children.
All in all, this is a terrifically satisfying chapter. Well done.
Author's Response: I think that as the oldest of a lot of kids, he'd have a higher tolerance, but I also want him to be extra fond of Lily. Teddy and Victoire are definitely going to be putting off kids for awhile.
Author's Response: I think that as the oldest of a lot of kids, he'd have a higher tolerance, but I also want him to be extra fond of Lily. Teddy and Victoire are definitely going to be putting off kids for awhile.
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