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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.10.05 - 09:09AM Title: Chapter 34
James is growing up into a fine young man. So is Al, although he and Nat have a little way to go.
I enjoyed this chapter....even the dark ending.
Author's Response: Thank you! I need to write the next chapter, should be this week. I had to finish another book.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.09.11 - 06:29PM Title: Chapter 34
Sad ending to this chapter. I'm very proud of the Potter boys though. They are definitely growing up to be fine young men!
Author's Response: They're growing up for sure. I did hate to end the chapter that way, but things are still progressing away from teenage romance
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.09.11 - 02:05PM Title: Chapter 34
Hurrah for James. Nat and Al are getting there.
Author's Response: They are going to get there eventually... probably... if all the readers don't kill me waiting for it.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.09.11 - 04:08AM Title: Chapter 34
Excellent. My heart goes out to Astoria. And what in incarnation is Draco thinking about now? Is he becomoming an idiot in his old age? Marrying off hi son, indeed. Love the scene between Honour and Lily and between James and Caroline. I am so glad that Harry has a son to be proud of and that it is more special since James was once a spoilt brat. He truly is repeating the personality of his grandfather James Potter Snr. Caroline seems to be slightly better, thank goodness. Any small improvement in her case is a blessing, although it will take her years to s for me to agree with me. Poor Nat and that horrible potion...but, hay ho..if it will help her grow, then it should be worth it in the end. Going on a diet in her case is a good wring sense of humour, wee done, you. Sad tha Nat and Al are both going going through the ringer before the will get together. Oh well, the more chapters for me to look forward to. Lol.
Author's Response: People do the damnedest things when they get old! It's like they suddenly forgot about it was like to be young. James is definitely growing up. Al and Nat... sooooo long from now. It drives me nuts, but it's true. It's even already written because it was driving me nuts. I have big plans for Lily!! Big. Oh and Rose meets someone next chapter... :D
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 03:10PM Title: Chapter 34
Well I hope not is going to enjoy all the help she is getting with he potion she is taking but something tells me she would rather stay they way she was and not deal with all the emotions that are coming to her....ah the joys of growing up.....kutgw
Author's Response: Puberty is never easy, but especially difficult when forced. Thanks!
