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Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2021.04.10 - 12:12AM Title: Chapter 53

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Does that after grandparents, was that really an accident or was it murder. It could be part of the grand scheme to get to the children of Harry and Ginny.. that is the ultimate goal.
scorpius & Lily. About time indeed. Now we have to wait for Al and Natalie to get it together

Author's Response: It's going to be a long wait for Al and Nat I'm afraid



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2021.01.01 - 11:58AM Title: Chapter 53

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In the first part with James, at one point he was thinking about "his mother pregnant with his sister Faith". I'm not normally a fan of the men asking permission to date or marry, but I liked Scorpius talking to Harry first.

Author's Response: OOOPPS Good catch. I'm not actually a fan of that either, if I'm honest. I think getting the opinion of your guy friends about a guy you want to date (assuming they know the guy) is a smart idea because guys understand each other better, but my dad didn't know any of the guys in my life apart from my best friend who I wasn't dating (but who gave me excellent advice I promptly ignored much to my detriment). But in this case it just felt right because it's the potters and the malfoys. If it makes sense for a character, say Teddy asking Bill because he knows Bill will need it, then I go with it. I go with what feels right for the character.



Reviewer: Lam Signed Date: 2020.06.25 - 05:26AM Title: Chapter 53

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Reviewer: jmcmutt Signed Date: 2020.06.12 - 09:38PM Title: Chapter 53

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I loved the chapter. Poor Caroline she really never gets a break. Loved that Scorpius wanted to get Harry permission before talkimg to Lily

Author's Response: Yeah, things are rough for her and I can't say they'll get much easier for a bit :-/



Reviewer: Marie3 Signed Date: 2020.06.09 - 10:44PM Title: Chapter 53

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Just spent the last couple days reading through your stories, you're an amazing writer! Thank you for sharing these works with us. I'm going to be anxiously waiting your updates now. Can't wait to find out how the story unfolds :D

I'm going to have to go check out your original works now!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I did start a patreon account if you want to check that out, under Sarah Jaune, but you can also find me on facebook.



Reviewer: cornishpasty Signed Date: 2020.06.07 - 07:39AM Title: Chapter 53

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I've been reading this series for a while now but have never left a review or comment, but seeing your most recent authors note I now feel the need to, if only for my own selfishness so you keep the story going!

I love the most recent chapter and I can't wait to see what else is in store.

Author's Response: I definitely will keep going. I have to finish it for my own sanity lol Thank you! I did create a patreon account under Sarah Jaune and I already have the first chapter of a new story up if you want to see it. Even without that, I still really appreciate the review!



Reviewer: smokeylovegood Signed Date: 2020.06.05 - 06:35PM Title: Chapter 53

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If I may, this chapter was a breath of fresh air.
Teen angst is a necessary evil in most decent stories with teenagers, but the Al and Nat angst was getting a bit angsty. The rapidity of this chapter was good; it was a change of pace (no pun intended) and helped to move the story along. After the last chapter, I wondered if there might be a time jump, especially after the dastardly Crabbe dropped the "sixteen for it to work" bomb.
I'm excited about this story again! Now, I want to know what will happen, will there be a switch-a-roo at the dark magic sperm bank? Will Lily and Scorpius figure it out and do something naughty to save her from someone evil and him from an arranged marriage?
Is it actually Honor Crabbe is after? Who cares? The pace is good and I'm liking it!

One thing I haven't understood. Why would Teddy / Caroline and Honor be responsible for the debts of the grandparents? Is this some Goblin treaty? It really don't make a lot of sense. Once things are sold, where would children get money? Sounds like something for Hermoine to get changed.

You shouldn't be too upset by a lack of reviews, I think sometimes people do become lax on reviews of long stories they have been reading from the beginning.

Author's Response: Yeah, I felt like the pacing was better in this one. I was worried at first it was a little rushed, but I feel like I spent time on the things that needed time and moved through what were important footnotes. Yes indeed! The goblins don't forgive and forget. The heirs are responsible. Thank you for the review and yes, that makes sense. I did end up starting a patreon account under Sarah Jaune for my original stuff if you want to check it out.



Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2020.06.03 - 08:06AM Title: Chapter 53

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I love this update and would be happy to contribute to a Patron account. Yay for Lily and Scorpius, poor Caroline, and now if only Al and Nat would get over their shyness. I love your writing and can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I did join patreon and you can find me under Sarah Jaune



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.06.02 - 06:07PM Title: Chapter 53

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Yea that’s what Ginny would say.....and Ginny would have more fun with it then anyone else....as for harry and scorpius I’m not sure who was more humiliated...kutgw

Author's Response: LOL I agree, such a Ginny thing to say!



Reviewer: greek goddess Signed Date: 2020.06.02 - 06:04PM Title: Chapter 53

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Reviewer: PotterBabe Signed Date: 2020.06.02 - 05:15PM Title: Chapter 53

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I love how sweet Scorpius is with Lily. Love this story and anxiously await your updates


Author's Response: Thank you, I'll keep at it



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2020.06.02 - 04:55PM Title: Chapter 53

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I love Lily and Scorpius.

Author's Response: Thanks!




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