Reviews For The Longest Day
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.11.23 - 02:28PM Title: The Longest Day
Glad to hear there's more from this AU in the pipeline.
Reviewer: Brennus Signed Date: 2015.11.21 - 09:15AM Title: The Longest Day
Me laugh at you, RighT3rantZ? As if. Oh, don't worry about those weird posts down at the bottom, Sasha. They pop up occasionally, normally during threads about the trinket nominations. Unless you're in the market for a knock-off handbag, of course.
Right, to the story! I liked it very much, although on first reading I did become a bit confused by some aspects, as did some other reviewers by the sound of it. I think a bit of extra background at various points would have helped. I know in AU it's always hard to find a balance between trying to surprise your readers and explaining outright what has been changed, but I feel a little bit of embellishment here and there would have helped. Still, its a good story which I enjoyed, and if this was your first attempt I'm impressed. I look forward to reading more from you. Perhaps a longer, multi-chapter story next time?
Author's Response: Thank you! I realise I now that I probably over did the mystery of their backstories a bit too much, but the story I'm writing now will hopefully explore them more. :)
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.11.20 - 04:03PM Title: The Longest Day
I'm so used to Harry and Ginny's traditional jobs that having them both be Aurors was a bit of a jolt when I first began reading the story. This is a nice little vignette and I'm glad Ginny found Harry and was able to take his mind off yet another death he was doubtlessly blaming himself for. I hope to read more of your work on this site sooner rather than later. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.11.20 - 02:53PM Title: The Longest Day
A very intersting one shot! Definitely AU since Molly didn't die in JKR's world! Glad to see Harry and Ginny hook up! Will be curious to see where you go with the story you are writing! :D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.11.20 - 11:28AM Title: The Longest Day
Seems like an interesting and original situation for our couple. I'm really interested in reading where you go with this story.
Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2015.11.20 - 03:50AM Title: The Longest Day
Might be worth classing it as AU so people can follow the differences. I found it a little uneven, but I liked the approach. You appear to have had blasé auto-corrected to blaze.
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2015.11.19 - 11:33PM Title: The Longest Day
You were able to create that sexual tension quickly nice work.
Reviewer: Sunlit Hufflepuff Signed Date: 2015.11.19 - 09:18PM Title: The Longest Day
This is really good! I like the way you gave just enough away to tell that this was a vastly different setting than canon, but still kept a lot a mystery. Also, I love the Harry and Ginny as aurors trope.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.11.19 - 08:20PM Title: The Longest Day
Good story, but all the ages and history are all wrong. What the bloody hell are all the other reviews all about?