Enjoying this story. The characters of Albus and Cleo are developing nicely. Having said that, I find all of the underlined words rather distracting. I understand that you are trying to show how emotional or loud Cleo can be, but it makes reading the story more difficult.

Author's Response: I will try to calm Cleo down a little. It is hard to write the underlines in HTML as well. I don't show Cleo much when she is with the girls in their room, where she can be very subdued indeed. I don''t want to make the story hard to read. Thank you for the compliments. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Jet