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Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2016.05.17 - 01:20PM Title: CH 7 "Potions, Herbology, and a New Broom"

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Great ending :-D

Author's Response: Thank you! Jet



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.05.13 - 08:31PM Title: CH 7 "Potions, Herbology, and a New Broom"

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Really enjoying the characters and the conversations in this story. I think it would be helpful to have more descriptive information about what is happening to the characters between the dialogue. The letters to the parents were wonderful, as were the brief reactions from the parents. Looking forward to reading what happens next to these characters, particularly Cleo, who is an interesting enigma at this point of the story.

Author's Response: There is a lot we have to learn about Cleo. There is a lot Cleo has to learn about Cleo. SIYE is a Harry/Ginny site, not a general fan fiction site, but that is not the only reason you will see a lot of Harry and Ginny. I always wanted to write this tale from the point of view of the parents as well as the point of view of the students. Having a couple of eleven year old students who are soulmates has to be terrifying if you are a parent. Knowing your son is subject to prophesies, just like you were, cannot be easy either. In some ways I wanted Harry to be the Dumbledore to Albus's being the Harry like character. Albus as Harry if he had all the advantages, instead of being brought up by the Dursleys? I have to work hard to add the descriptions that set the stage for the story. I have some chapters where adding descriptions should come naturally. I am also reminded by my Beta Arnel that there are people who will be reading the Albus stories who have not read the four ninteen years stories, so I need to fill in information. Keep asking me to add more descriptive writing, and I will try hard to. Thank you for the review! Jet



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.05.13 - 05:08PM Title: CH 7 "Potions, Herbology, and a New Broom"

Oh dear rose is in a pickel now and she does not even know it....as for ron it took him long enought ot figure out what hermione was thinking....as for ginny she is in need of meeting cleo and al needs to show ginny it will be fine....kutgw

Author's Response: Ginny does need to meet Cleo, and the relationship between Ginny and Cleo will become more important. Rose and Scorpius are not like Ron and Hermione, but there are parallels. Will Scorpius be able to win Ron over? Will it matter? What about Scorpius's family? There is lots of potential in this relationship. Thank you for the faithful reviewing. Jet




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