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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.07.17 - 12:41PM Title: Chapter 3: Mr M. Miyagi

well its ture the best way to learn is from your mistakes...kutgw



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.06.26 - 04:10PM Title: Chapter 3: Mr M. Miyagi

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Thank you for another great chapter, Daniel-san! Looks like our trio are in a lot worse of a pickle than they realized - and the pickle juice is sour! I'm really liking Melchior - he's kinda the anti-Dumbledore! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Daniel-san? I admire your cheek! :) Yes, they're really in a bad spot, aren't they? And it makes me really happy you like Melchior! It's always a bit scary to create OC's in fanfic, so it feels very good that he's generally being well-received.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.06.26 - 09:59AM Title: Chapter 3: Mr M. Miyagi

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Author's Response: Thanks again for the rating!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.06.26 - 07:16AM Title: Chapter 3: Mr M. Miyagi

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I'm still convinced that Melchior and Selene have secrets, but I'm afraid that I have to wait until the end of story to learn a bit more about it and their true motives.
I'm curious to know why Harry knows about Sirius and his true story so soon. Apparently the two of them got to know each other immediately after Sirius' outbreak.
And what is the official status of Ginny and Harry? Probably at least good friends, otherwise Ginny would certainly not have gone with Harry to meet Sirius. And how did they become friends. And what role will Tonks play? Will the trio secretly contact the Weasleys to calm them down? ... and who is the mysterious Mr. Miyagi?

You see, you've got me hooked. Firstly, to see what you've planned for the tree (or five?) of them, and secondly to get answers to my many questions, lol.
Many thanks for another intriguing chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'll do my best to answer your questions as the story progresses! Expect more insights on Ginny and Harry's friendship and connection soon.

Author's Response: Oh, and before I forget: Mr. Miyagi is the old mentor in the movie Karate Kid. Seemed appropriate to use in the title, I think.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.06.25 - 08:44PM Title: Chapter 3: Mr M. Miyagi

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Enjoyable chapter. I am very curious to see what will happen next with Harry and Ginny under the tutelage of the mysterious Melchior.I am also rather interested to see what might happen between Sirius and Selene. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Author's Response: We will have more training, certainly! And expect more of Harry's backstory too!



Reviewer: MisterBlack Signed Date: 2016.06.25 - 03:37PM Title: Chapter 3: Mr M. Miyagi

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There is just one thing I personally do not like: it is too short! I want moar!! :P

This was a great chapter because we finally get some new information. It is no surprise (at least to me) that Harry did not REALLY attack Lupin but was a ploy to help them escape and cover Lupin. Excellent, yes, most excellent.

One thing did give me pause though. I understand why the Weasleys would speak ill of Harry (and Sirius) but I do not understand Dumbledore's intentions by giving his opinion in the newspaper. It would take a lot to fool Dumbledore and I would think he of all people would know that there is more to the story than what was printed. At least he must have a clue since he refused to implicate Ginny as well.

I have to say though you have really put Harry and Ginny in a bind here. Sirius is for the most part okay because he is an adult and he finished his education but Ginny and Harry have been expelled and if what Melchior says is true then they will be fugitives for a long time.

It is a gloom future for them. I feel especially bad for Ginny. None of this was her fault and she is being dragged into and paying the consequences.

I wonder what this will mean for the Order of the Phoenix. We know Voldemort will eventually return but how? More importantly will Tonks and Black ever meet again? They are family after all.

Is there a point to Harry being a Slytherin? I don't mind myself but I only bring it up because it seems to have no true consequences considering he is now expelled except for maybe creating fear and distrust amongst others.

So many things can just happen from here. Harry is going to have a hard time with the Weasley family I know it. He is Ginny's future though so he will have to suffer through it. Hopefully Ginny will help him out.

Author's Response: Well, we're both in luck! I can't get enough of publishing new chapters. Until chapter 11, things should be coming out pretty quickly after each other. About Dumbledore speaking ill of Harry: he is a man who considers everything. Chapter 1 gave hints as to what Dumbledore's stance is on Harry. He defended him, as you can read in the news articles, but at the same time he isn't too trusting of Harry. And he's still a leading figure in the Ministry. Dumbledore is a clever man, he knows what he should say and what he shouldn't. About Harry being in Slytherin: it fits. it fits within the themes of Harry being an outcast. It's also a reason for people to mistrust him. Harry being a Slytherin will continue to be an important point in the story. It does all seem like doom and gloom, doesn't it? Just remember, though, to not confuse thoughts with the truth. Having a bad time, feeling really down and out doesn't make the thought "it will never get better" truth. And as long as you keep this in mind, there will always be hope and light. :)




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